Wrapped in Unconditional Love by nocturnecsh

Writers • Romance • posted on Jan 31, 2005

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"Wrapped in Unconditional Love" Love Overwhelming All consuming Beyond anything ever known before Every thought Every passion Every breath Focused on one One Beautiful All encompassing Beyond anyone ever known before Every word Every motion Every breath The focus of my existence Unattainable I cry out with love But you are gone I seek you I search for you But you are not there You stand before me But you are far away You long for another Shutting me out My heart reaches forth Grasping the air Wanting nothing but you You smile and turn away Looking for the love Of one who has shut YOU out Does your heart cry for him? Like mine does for you? Do you know the pain? Wrapped in unconditional love? To hold you again To proclaim my love for you As I fall into those eyes once more Time Moving All knowing Beyond the ability to control Every desire Every prayer Every moment Waiting just for you J.P. Wiegand ************ This was the most painful poem I've ever written. Between each phrase I paced the floor and sobbed - not wept; sobbed. It seemed to take forever to express the ache. It took four months for me to sit and write after that. I just didn't have the courage to put myself through it again. -j.p.

Comments (7)

lostandconfuzed

8:18PM | Mon, 31 January 2005

wow. i dont really know what to say, other than you are a great writer and you expressed every emotion within you greatly. im sorry for your loss and i pray and hope that you can grow from it and move on...even though its easier said than done...

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TallPockets

11:46PM | Mon, 31 January 2005

Courageous piece. Excellent writing. V

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FireTemptress

12:35AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

Incredible. That was incredible. Thank you, for having the courage to go through those emotions, and put them into words. I have felt this kind of heartbreak, and feel for you with every bit of my soul. Thank you for sharing.

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eternalwytch1

3:40AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

Hurt like that... I know all too well. You expressed your deepest pain well my friend.

netsia

9:47AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

The agony is what creates the ecstasy....this is beautiful, thank you for sharing a piece of your heart V

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NothingNess

9:49AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

I have never read anything so beautiful, sad and heart wrenching. I have felt this way about a person and to this day I cannot write of it. I suppose holding onto that pain is a way to hold onto a piece of that person, past and reality. You will survive and you will love again.

tony_br22

7:17PM | Tue, 01 February 2005

amazing writing :-)