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Undying

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Feb 05, 2005
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as everything spins out of control out of my reach around me I shield myself from the debris tears turn to ice pelting against my chest shielding my heart which continues to beat even when mangled or broken I will rise I will live I shall walk my path and shirk no longer you can't kill me smother me, change me or break me pain always in time makes me stronger

Comments (14)


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eternalwytch1

2:39PM | Sat, 05 February 2005

Very true babes. HUGZ Wonderfully written.

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cagewench

2:42PM | Sat, 05 February 2005

thank you... I expect most of my stuff is going to be a lil different for the next while...

Pen_Is_Envy

3:39PM | Sat, 05 February 2005

Cara, another one that just rips your guts out. Stunning imagery with your words. :)

lostandconfuzed

5:17PM | Sat, 05 February 2005

I really like how it starts out with the world being out of control, and yet, you still rise and prove that nothing can break you. Whatever happened to inspire this peace, I'm glad, it sounds like you are discovering things in life that not many of us can. Keep up the good work :)

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naria

6:20PM | Sat, 05 February 2005

So Brilliant and so vivid "tears turn to ice pelting against my chest" I love it. I love your work, you are an inspirtation to me. xox Mandy

xxxander

6:47PM | Sat, 05 February 2005

WOW...that one hit me hard too..it's how I feel sometimes...I have been through A LOT of pain in my life..and I KNOW it has made me a stronger person!! Your words always touch me so ..hugs

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cagewench

6:50PM | Sat, 05 February 2005

thank you everyone HUG Eventually I'll explain what's inspired all this stuff...

cynlee

12:37PM | Sun, 06 February 2005

you create such feeling with your fine use of weaving words... you will be strong, living proof of it :]

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TallPockets

12:52PM | Sun, 06 February 2005

Sadly brilliant work. Hang in there Miss Cara Mae. V

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cagewench

4:15PM | Sun, 06 February 2005

Thanks... I'm taking some steps this wk...

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AusPoet

1:55PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

Cara, I hope all is well - it's great to see such strength in amongst the torment. Keep your chin up, and do what you have to do. hug!

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cagewench

2:10PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

thanks! too bad you aren't logged on MSN right now...

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FireTemptress

4:17PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

Your speaking my language right now dear. Can't tell you how much I understand what you saying, and how much I appreciate you sharing your work. This one is gonna go on my mirror, as my new motto! Thank you!

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cagewench

4:45PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

thanks for the comment... I'm glad this one resonates for you :)


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