Unexpected explosions by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Feb 06, 2005

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Description

Resolve hardening Determination settling Into these bones Which ache Breath stolen As energy explodes From my chest From my throat Unexpected And somewhat Frightening Sweeping through The venue Disrupting other spirits I lost control And found pain I had not acknowledged So deeply had it Been buried Until now

Comments (11)

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eternalwytch1

6:16PM | Sun, 06 February 2005

Powerful and sounds like good therapy

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nocturnecsh

6:59PM | Sun, 06 February 2005

I concur. "Breath stolen As energy explodes" - that is fantastic! Amazing what is "found" when one has "lost control". Great shtuff!!

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cagewench

9:37PM | Sun, 06 February 2005

thank you my dears :)

tony_br22

12:24AM | Mon, 07 February 2005

beautiful written :-) .. excellent done

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TallPockets

11:29AM | Mon, 07 February 2005

Superb piece, Miss Cara Mae. V I don't think you ever 'lost' control of anything, imho. I see the volcano which must erupt from time to time to resettle itself back into normalcy? PEACE to ya', my dear lady.

cynlee

12:20PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

so wonderful descriptive... i feel it :]

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cagewench

1:44PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

Brian, I have yet to discover "normalcy" i think...

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AusPoet

2:01PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

Cara, I thin kyou have more of an idea of normalcy than you realise - you are just far better at expressing the feelings that go along with it than most people. Excellent piece. I hope your path is continuing as smoothly as possible.

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cagewench

2:11PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

thank you my dear :)

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