Chasing Desires by miserys_extacy

Writers • (none) • posted on Feb 14, 2005

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I wanted to go out today, And breathe the golden air. Slipped into worn shoes, Found a jacket to keep the warmth, Stepped out of that door, But I can

Comments (7)

lostandconfuzed

11:52PM | Mon, 14 February 2005

its strange how we can think life is one way and then open our eyes and discover its something different. keep it up kiddo

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eternalwytch1

6:00AM | Tue, 15 February 2005

Welcome back!!! Wonderful piece and illusions are so easily shattered....

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TallPockets

9:00AM | Tue, 15 February 2005

Reminds T.P. of how many dozen times he's locked his keys in his car. WINK. Wonderful work and welcome back.

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experimental

2:03PM | Tue, 15 February 2005

Nope, didn't forget you. Excellent writing as always. It really fits with the sort of weather we're having here in Chicago lately. Sort of nice, then just turns nasty in an instant. Thanks for sharing.

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Shadowmonkey

3:17AM | Wed, 16 February 2005

I tired to forget but the writing needed an exceptional writer. Excellent poem that twists unexpectedly.

FormingInYourMind223

10:51AM | Sun, 20 February 2005

Good to have you back. I am really lost for words, except for this one: Excellent. Like TP, this reminds me of how many times I've locked myself out of my house.

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micsteel

1:04PM | Fri, 20 May 2005

Would make an interesting science fiction/horror story, or even fantasy: "In a fit of anger, the cranky witch tossed the impudent blossom-stealer into an alternate reality..."