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meltdown by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Feb 17, 2005
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I cry the best when I'm alone so no one is cut by my brittle weeping sometimes it deafens me and sometimes I choke it back a gasping silence of tears while my son lays sleeping I cry the best when I'm alone so no one can see the pain I bear its weight so heavy against my chest tasting blood within my throat cannibalizing my soul so I can keep it near I cry the best when I'm alone choking on emotions -- raw shards of glass fall from my eyes cutting into gangrenous flesh pungent, festering pain released feeds my hunchbacked nightmare beast I cry the best when I'm alone so no one ever gets to see the naked girl the nightmare beast the patch worked heart and battered soul melting down inside of me

Comments (11)

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FireTemptress

1:08AM | Fri, 18 February 2005

Wow, I am stunned..... I truly identify, and my heart reaches out to you. Thank you for being brave enough to open your soul up like this....

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TallPockets

1:20AM | Fri, 18 February 2005

Well dear soul, TallPockets has provoked many people to tears. WINK. Brilliantly written piece. Big V and even bigggggger HUG. Hang tough.

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Shadowmonkey

2:07AM | Fri, 18 February 2005

Such a deep and emotional stuff. Stand tall my dear friend and be strong. In the end all troubles pass, it is just a waiting game.

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eternalwytch1

4:17AM | Fri, 18 February 2005

I know the feeling babes... HUGZ

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cagewench

8:36AM | Fri, 18 February 2005

thank you all HUG

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RNKarenER

11:36AM | Fri, 18 February 2005

Very emotional words. This one made me cry. Excellent poem

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cagewench

12:16PM | Fri, 18 February 2005

thanks... I was crying when I wrote it...

cynlee

1:44AM | Sat, 19 February 2005

cuts deep, you will survive, your words are strong

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cagewench

8:32AM | Sat, 19 February 2005

thanks cyn!

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Ensomniac

4:19AM | Sun, 20 February 2005

Hugz Cara.

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cagewench

9:14AM | Sun, 20 February 2005

HUGZ back

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