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Standing

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Feb 22, 2005
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Drinking stagnant water Forcing myself to swallow When all I want to do Is to vomit And to leave this place Though I cannot Not yet To survive, I must bide my time Even at this price Gathering my strength Making a plan For the road ahead Into the unknown

Comments (9)


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Shadowmonkey

12:21PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

Despite the openness of the words I still feel pended in through reading this. Very claustrophobic with desperation. Powerful and emotive ;0)

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cagewench

12:43PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

Eventually, once my life sitch resolves itself, I am hoping a happier tone will appear in my work...

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TallPockets

1:21PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

Excellent, descriptive piece. V Here's hoping that the light at the end of the proverbial tunnel shines brighter each day - and soon.

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cagewench

2:09PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

Thank you, Brian :)

cynlee

3:30PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

live for today, not the tomorrow... there must be something worthwhile, so easy to say, not so easy to do... your writing breaths familiarity

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eternalwytch1

4:44AM | Wed, 23 February 2005

Hang on babes, every prison has a key to unlock it.

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cagewench

8:07AM | Wed, 23 February 2005

thank you!!!!

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Ensomniac

2:43AM | Sat, 26 February 2005

Sometimes I have to go away and think about what you've written. Maybe it hits too close to home, maybe it makes me angry, maybe it hurts, maybe it's art. It's passionate... desperate... provocative... always compelling. I truly wish for you a happier tomorrow...and cleaner water.

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cagewench

8:24AM | Sun, 27 February 2005

Thanks Jay :)


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