Yet Forbidden by sky13point1

Writers • Romance • posted on Feb 22, 2005

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I never touched you Yet I always feel you I never look for you Yet you are always there I never meant it to hurt Yet the pain is relentless I was never so wrong Yet knew it was right I never wanted you more Yet have you not I have never been so good Yet felt so cruel I have never been so deceptive Yet been so honest I have never been so torn Yet so resolved I have never been so strong Yet felt so weak I have never been so in love Yet forbidden

Comments (10)

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Shadowmonkey

11:07AM | Tue, 22 February 2005

Which is always the one you want, the forbidden. :0)

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TallPockets

1:18PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

Sounds like an extremely precarious position to find oneself in. Excellent writing.

sky13point1

2:38PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

Thanks for the comments :) It was worth the risk TP.

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FireTemptress

11:59PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

WHOA..... I mean....... WHOA. This describes perfectly the conflict and confusion that this type of relationship brings. I'm amazed.... so amazed. Thank you!

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nocturnecsh

8:41PM | Wed, 23 February 2005

Wait! I had a box of tissues around here somewhere! You captured the moment very well!

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cagewench

11:04AM | Fri, 25 February 2005

excellent!!!!!!!

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SusiQ

2:08AM | Wed, 31 August 2005

This is an incredible writing. Thanks for sharing it.

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Chipka

11:18PM | Sun, 27 January 2008

This is great, but I have to say that the last line is what really socks it to your reader. Great work.

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beachzz

10:15AM | Mon, 26 May 2008

Wow, this is so simple, yet so very powerful~~there are so many kinds of love that are forbidden; sometimes we have to take a chance and just go for it anyway!!

Wolfspirit

5:20PM | Sun, 08 June 2008

I love this writing, I once thought all that of myself, and the ending, I quote: "I have never been so in love Yet forbidden" Perfect. I'm with beachzz, I'm going for it, and it feels wonderful! Thank you for sharing.