religiosity by sky13point1

Writers • World Events/Social Commentary • posted on Feb 28, 2005

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religiosity dark hearts cloaked in white perverted minds covered with slick hair vomit

Comments (6)

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experimental

5:19PM | Mon, 28 February 2005

If you only knew the things I know, you would see how true your poem rings. Perhaps you do know, but it does not matter. Excellent words, thank you for sharing.

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cagewench

6:23PM | Mon, 28 February 2005

best line: "a crucible bondage for hope"

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Shadowmonkey

2:25AM | Tue, 01 March 2005

Ooo, that hits the spot ;0)

sky13point1

8:36AM | Tue, 01 March 2005

I was really vacillating and hesitating whether to post this piece, knowing it had potential to be offensive. Thank you for the comments.

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Turin_Returns

6:32AM | Wed, 02 March 2005

Amen! And well titled....

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meico

11:48AM | Fri, 23 May 2008

I think this says what we all know to be true - but,sadly, few are prepared to admit. The poem has an appropriately 'punchy' rhythm and some very fine lines. Mike