Lighthouse by angel_of_darkness
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Description
Sinking and drowning in an ocean
Filled with passion and devotion
Sending out an S.O.S.
Needing help to get out of this mess.
My heart is a ship in the darkest sea.
You are the lighthouse that can save me
You are the light that I can
Comments (5)
haunter_of_darkness
Very Beautyfull
Wolfspirit
I have felt this...Wonderfully written.
erviin
Girl this is GREAT. Thou, I'm not sure I understood the "Im filled fear", for it sounds like there's a "whith" missing in the middle. Same with "I can see you light". Sounds more like "see your light". However, I might have missed what you meant. Anyhow, it's AWESOME. Your work of rimes in pairs is superb.
angel_of_darkness
now I saw the mistake thanks for noticing erviin. Must have been because I was typing 2 fast
Faewind
I like the contrasting emotions.."I can see your light and it feels so near. But it feels like youre so far away," Near, and far away at the same time. Kind of like being here, but emotionally distant.