Unnoticed by irenicusknightingale
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Unnoticed
He creeps in the forest
Unnoticed by the leaves
Unnoticed by the trees
Uncared for by the world
As time goes on
His light grows darker
He creeps slower
And yet he's still
Unnoticed by the leaves
Unnoticed by the trees
Uncared for by the world
Still time goes on
Still his light grows darker
Still he creeps slower
The leaves change color
The trees grow taller
The world grow stronger
But his light's gone
Now he's motionless
Yet he is still unnoticed
By the leaves and trees
Yet he is still uncared for
By the world
comment's and feedback welcomed, im still not very good at this poem stuff
Comments (2)
Shadowmonkey
I like the style of the words you use here. It reads quite well and creates an interesting image in my mind.
bobbystahr
wow...solitary...alone...you got that right...