Desperado by erviin

Writers • Romance • posted on Apr 11, 2005

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***WARNING***
Lousy Writing Ahead
You've been warned

Desperado

I'm lost in the mist
full of sadness,
in anguish I thirst
for something to fill
this empty space
I have inside me

This immense loneliness
not in body, but in soul
It does not matter
how crowded is the hall
How many come and go
Even so I feel alone

Soon I hope to run out
of tears which fall down
beyond the control
of this stupid clown
which I can't stop feeling
I have become.

2005-04-11

ErViIn (AKA VKNG)

The clown comparsion is NOT based on the fact that clowns make people laugh, but on the fact that Clowns are sad, and always are suposed to be crying. In fact, they usally have tears painted on their faces. However, not many people relates clowns to sadness, so this is why I clarify the matter.

This has no saga. I just have a bad day.

Thanks for reading
Comments are most welcome

Comments (3)

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angel_of_darkness

5:30PM | Tue, 12 April 2005

very nice I wonder what you would think of mine?

Wolfspirit

9:13PM | Tue, 12 April 2005

Hi, we all have bad days and sad days too. As I am sorry this day is sad for you as well, I also hope everything gets better. Anyhow, the writing here you have I enjoyed as it is written well and it flowed well and unique from what I have seen as in the comparison to the clown. I agree, to me clowns always appeared sad and I often wondered why people associated them with happy. Anyhow, thanks for sharing and excellent work.

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Shadowmonkey

9:47AM | Thu, 14 April 2005

I would certainly not say lousy writing. It is well constructed and creates an image inside my head. In my own mind I dont think clowns to be happy or sad just evil. So to even think about them at the end of any sort of day will produce a bad day for me. ;0)