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Breaking Edge

Writers Romance posted on Apr 13, 2005
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"Breaking Edge" I'm holding on to the edge I'm holding so tight I don't want to let go But the edge is getting weak Held strong by thoughts of you Weakened by their hate They are controlling your thoughts They are making you question You don't want to see me fall But will you risk me for them? I don't want to fall I feel the edge start to shift Bits and pieces crumble They fall down to my waiting death Can't you just think for yourself? Do not worry about them If they really cared about you They would not hate you for saving me Will you save me? Will you let me fall away from you? The end is coming I really don't want to fall away I love you so much I miss you so much I feel your love for me I see your caring and bless it But your blinded by their words You would risk me for them Don't let them control your thought Don't let them make me fall I feel it now The edge has broken I begin to fall down the hole There is still time Will you reach out and save me? Will you break free of control? Will you watch me die today? I'm falling fast now Please save me; break free Let your thoughts be your own What will you decide? I think you will let me fall I know you will let me fall I saw it in your eyes just now I saw your hidden smile You've betrayed me so much You lie to me now when I need honesty You crush my dreams and heart How could I ever have feelings for you When you forget about me so easily?

Comments (2)


x_broken_minded_x

9:25PM | Sun, 17 April 2005

i know that this is tough for u...but you wont give up...you need an answer that you haven't yet gotten..it will determine everything..are you worth risking..she shouldnt listen to every one around her though...she needs to decide for herself, and soon..instead of driving you through the walls. The real question is, "is she worth it"?...good writing.

dragoon6465

2:34PM | Thu, 28 April 2005

dude that waz something i have read many thing's that are meant to try to touch us in some way but they dont, wat you wrote here waz great. When i got to the second paragraph had me because i felt wat you are or wat you message you are trying to put out it waz great. if you keep writeing stuff like this one day if you keep them all you should put them in a book or something and call The Up's and Down's of love


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