Breaking Edge by FormingInYourMind223
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Description
"Breaking Edge"
I'm holding on to the edge
I'm holding so tight
I don't want to let go
But the edge is getting weak
Held strong by thoughts of you
Weakened by their hate
They are controlling your thoughts
They are making you question
You don't want to see me fall
But will you risk me for them?
I don't want to fall
I feel the edge start to shift
Bits and pieces crumble
They fall down to my waiting death
Can't you just think for yourself?
Do not worry about them
If they really cared about you
They would not hate you for saving me
Will you save me?
Will you let me fall away from you?
The end is coming
I really don't want to fall away
I love you so much
I miss you so much
I feel your love for me
I see your caring and bless it
But your blinded by their words
You would risk me for them
Don't let them control your thought
Don't let them make me fall
I feel it now
The edge has broken
I begin to fall down the hole
There is still time
Will you reach out and save me?
Will you break free of control?
Will you watch me die today?
I'm falling fast now
Please save me; break free
Let your thoughts be your own
What will you decide?
I think you will let me fall
I know you will let me fall
I saw it in your eyes just now
I saw your hidden smile
You've betrayed me so much
You lie to me now when I need honesty
You crush my dreams and heart
How could I ever have feelings for you
When you forget about me so easily?
Comments (2)
x_broken_minded_x
i know that this is tough for u...but you wont give up...you need an answer that you haven't yet gotten..it will determine everything..are you worth risking..she shouldnt listen to every one around her though...she needs to decide for herself, and soon..instead of driving you through the walls. The real question is, "is she worth it"?...good writing.
dragoon6465
dude that waz something i have read many thing's that are meant to try to touch us in some way but they dont, wat you wrote here waz great. When i got to the second paragraph had me because i felt wat you are or wat you message you are trying to put out it waz great. if you keep writeing stuff like this one day if you keep them all you should put them in a book or something and call The Up's and Down's of love