The wind by NothingNess
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Description
Howling in my ears
Blowing right through me
Freezing me to the bone
Swirling a trail of havoc
Shattering precious dreams
Breaking objects of my desire
Rattling foundations of trust
Snuffing passion
Comments (8)
kimariehere
what a wonderful illstrative work and poem .. !!!!! fantastic!~! WOW!
eternalwytch1
Beautiful hun.
Shadowmonkey
I have always loved the wind that picks up before a storm. The quietness in the air streaked with an electricity, warning of the coming excitement. Hey Leah this is cool, and I like it very much. Your work I find grows with each new post, keep em coming ;0)
depalo
N, I like walking beside you, as we traverse the path. I am wondering why you feel the need to qualify and to further explain this piece. It clearly stands on it own. Grab onto the faith and KNOW! that I(the reader), possess the capacity to not require more. Furthermore, if I(the reader), miss the mark, then 'That's all it means'. Which-a-way...?? That-a-way??, okay, let's go! D
TallPockets
Excellent piece. To me the wind is like any other force or energy on Earth. If handled correctly, it can make a ship sail fast. If not handled well, it can throw someone off course. If that makes sense? WINK. My best. Keep writing. T.P.
Wolfspirit
The "wind" most certainly can feel like this, yet dear NothingNess, you have the right, and should if it to often feels as such, take shelter from it. This does not mean climb inside your self or that you're weak if you do Yet go where this "unmerciful wind" is not when it has it fits that hurt you. As in this bit of writing, it seems to hurt you greatly. Get out of its pathdon't allow it to treat you as such. You owe it to yourself. In order to have true respect for the wind and its mighty existence, we also must have respect for ourselves and realize we too have a mighty powerthe power of choice. To either stand in its wake or take shelter, if and when we must as not to allow it the pleasure of harming us when its unforgiving thrashings come a whistling its rage our way. Excellent writing and thank you for sharing.
FireTemptress
Mmmm....... amazing how one person, can have such an effect. Your picture, and your words.... draw a picture, a feeling.... create an emotion. Fabulous work...
micsteel
Love is Family. If it's not here, get the FFFF out of the wind! Superb picture to go with this.