Profound Passion by FireTemptress

Writers • Romance • posted on May 23, 2005

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Profound Passion The room is lit A single flame Shadows dance Across your face I stroke your skin And watch you smile And bid the world Leave for a while I feel the heat Begin to rise I see your soul There in your eyes Time has stopped I arch my spine My touch tells you That you are mine Feel my heart Without my words Slick with sweat We join our worlds Taste my breath I touch your dreams Secure we know It

Comments (6)

depalo

5:35PM | Mon, 23 May 2005

Thank you. I read to the cadence, the natural metronome of the heart beat. There are many creative ways to seek out and to discover the beauty in the act. Keep on! D

atom80

6:15PM | Mon, 23 May 2005

It's funny how much passion I can hear in your words, yet you paint a picture of a sweet and innocent moment. Excellent piece!!

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NothingNess

9:04AM | Tue, 24 May 2005

Beautiful words to capture a beautiful act between two people.

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alsafysh

12:02PM | Tue, 24 May 2005

WOW, damn girl i keep wanting to get on this and leave you bizaar messages that are lodged deep within the brain, yet after i read your poems everything shuts off and i get all fumbly with my words. You sure do know how to grab people with intense honesty, all the "excellent poem" stuff aside. whatever you do takes it to the exceptional scale. Why do i have a mental picture of you in a bathroom writting with crayons on the wall? "there once was a guy from natucket..." maybe because simple, clean, and honest have all been known to go hand in hand. Uh, i suppose when i started writting i had a point somewhere.....BRAVO again. h/k Al

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eternalwytch1

5:48AM | Wed, 25 May 2005

Beautiful hun

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FireTemptress

9:45AM | Wed, 25 May 2005

Thank you all for your comments, I appreciate them so much! I wrote this one, trying to explain how I feel about communicating emotion through touch. This one is more about symbolism than an actual act, but I believe the emotion is really what is important! Thank you all, for your comments....