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Revelation

Writers Romance posted on Jun 03, 2005
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Just a side note...... the picture on this one I took, and wanted to share along with my poem. Both were products of a very special person, the poem, about him, and the flowers, given to me by him and captured forever in my photograph. I hope you enjoy! ************************************************* Revelation I can't really explain it I don't really even know why My heart's full to overflowing It moves me till I want to cry One tear slides down my cheek As I examine the way that I feel I'm not sure that you can realize The emotions so intense and real I close my eyes and lean back I smile, tears drip off my chin This moment is perfect and beautiful And we only can just now begin I want to find words to express This fullness I feel in my soul I try to relay my joy and desire To thank you for making me whole I fail as I try to explain I silently laugh at the scene I'm sure you are thinking I've lost my mind I giggle as we're stuck between I'm pulling you nearer each day I might pull a little too much It won't be like this forever my dear Just bear with me when I need your touch I promise I'm not insecure I'm not even needy or scared I've just realized what you mean to me I'm feeling so high and so bare So while we move forward each day And I confuse you with my every mood Remember that all of it comes from The love that now runs in my blood

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renderix

5:47PM | Fri, 03 June 2005

your in love, thats wonderful!you can feel it intensively-thats even better! congrats i whish you all the best for your future! but please put the big foto in...if you have time left..

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TallPockets

6:49PM | Fri, 03 June 2005

Awww. True Love. ~SIGH~ You give us all hope.

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eternalwytch1

5:39AM | Sat, 04 June 2005

Awwwwwwwwwww! How sweet!

atom80

1:14AM | Sun, 05 June 2005

blush To know that such words have been created with me in mind puts me beyond mere flattery. I sit and wonder what have I done to earn such sentiment, but clearly I can think of nothing. All I could ask for...more than I could hope for ...you are these things...a blessing, an angel and all mine...kiss

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alsafysh

10:26PM | Sun, 05 June 2005

ok i'm not gonna say awww(i just did) even though i want to. as far as your poetry goes there is little to say because it's been said before. extremly thrilling to read each time. makes my own heart pound at the thoughts and emotions churned inside. oh and i wanna see the full size of that image too. lol!

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Shadowmonkey

5:23PM | Tue, 07 June 2005

A feeling that can build you so high. I feeling that is better than any other. I enjoyed this so much thank you for the post ;0)


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