Intruder WIP by TygerCub
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This is still a work in process. It needs something to tie it all together and keep the audience's eyes in the center of the action. But I'm pretty happy with the story. Funny thing is, I can't decide just WHO is the intruder.
Many thanks to REMC for the Toxin figure. It's a blast! Blasters are from B-bay downloads, and that's the Side Sweep hair from the freestuff section. Once again I have to thank those wonderful freestuff artists for their valuable contributions!
Comments (1)
_dodger
Suggestion: the tying it all together and eye control just needs a little compositional change here and there. The long geometric down the centre of the piece should be moved away fro teh centre and broken, because a strong geometric will steal the show from an organic. I'd try angling the camera back, looking into the dark more and less at the corner itself. Then dolly over so the corner doesn't remain in the centre. I'd also pull the goblins in closer to the corner itself. Id definitely place more subtle maps on the wall and corner.