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Subject: friend in the dark!

Tanialmeida opened this issue on Feb 03, 2003 · 6 posts
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Tanialmeida ( ) posted Mon, 03 February 2003 at 8:43 AM · edited Thu, 25 July 2024 at 5:16 AM

an image becomes a word ... a word becomes a voice ... a voice becomes a friend an eternal bridged in the darkness between us!

tjames ( ) posted Mon, 03 February 2003 at 4:06 PM

The brevity of your words suggest it would be good to support a graphic. That's what I'm all about. Did you have something in mind? You know greeting card companies make millions by combining these two elements (just a suggestion)

Tanialmeida ( ) posted Mon, 03 February 2003 at 5:29 PM

that is a good suggestion yes
i did this poem dedicated to online friends
they are so so so very important to me!
my words they come often like spoken words
smtimes very short suitable for a postard u
are right this could perfectly go along my
2D work piece AliEnWarM

Shoshanna ( ) posted Tue, 04 February 2003 at 2:45 AM

This is beautiful. :-)


Tanialmeida ( ) posted Tue, 04 February 2003 at 6:17 AM

thank u shoshanna ;0] U are very kind!

Crescent ( ) posted Wed, 05 February 2003 at 8:16 PM

Very nice with the parallelism in the lines. You got the flow going without beating us over the heads with it. I'm confused on one line, though:

an eternal bridged in

Did you mean:

an eternal bridge in

Cheers!

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