This is my first render, and some people may have seen my progress in the art gallery over the last week or so. I was recently rudely informed via e-mail that the Art Gallery isn't for a WIP(the rude shall remain un-named) Anyway, this is my first attempt at drawing in hair. Please, tell me what you think. Thanks, -Kage -Throne by Robert Sharkey -Panties by Bebop

Oops, I forgot, the hair isn't finished yet. Still have a little more to do with the hair hanging in back, and I have yet to add highlights and shadows. It also looks better on my pc, I haven't figured out how to get those really smooth, crystal clear uploads yet.

Nice map work on her top. Try a similar bum on her skin but without the highlighting perhaps.

Ignore the rude people. There are many more friendly people around here. In fact, if you want, post a bunch of WIPs in the gallery. You've got 3 uploads per day to the gallery, post whatever pics you feel like, so long as subject matter's appropriate (i.e. not belonging at R'otica). I like the pic. I agree about the bump on her top. Two things, in my opinion, could improve this a bit: First, you might want a better texture. Check the free stuff, there's TONS of textures. =) Second, the hair's pretty plastic. There are two main workarounds for poser's plastic hair. First is to do your hair in postwork, which requires a bit of talent for drawing. The other is to get a transmapped hair prop, such as Kozaburo's (check Digital Babes, he's got a number of good ones). There's nothing wrong with her hair, if you like it that way. I'm just offering suggestions in case you want more realistic hair. You're doing a wonderful job, especially for a first render. =) Rosh