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Subject: CGTalk WIP sillyness revisited


draculaz ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 2:10 PM · edited Thu, 21 November 2024 at 9:06 PM

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don't get on my case about the size of the image. but yeah, comments and crits appreciated :) drac (As well as general style issues)


tjohn ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 2:22 PM

If the Jetsons were real, they'd live here. :^) Fantastic modeling.

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draculaz ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 2:27 PM

i'm worried it's too monochromatic. i also have no clue where to take it from here safe of adding some traffic =/


Ang25 ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 2:52 PM

Traffic will definately push this up a notch but its already fantastic looking!


Rochr ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 3:02 PM

Great metropolis you have here pal. Love the architecture. :) Personally i would add a little color to it. It would definitely add to the scene. For example, a faint blue lightsource from left/behind the cam and another red, coming from the opposite right, and perhaps some ranged white lights coming from between the buildings to simulate some streetlife. You could probably add some traffic between the buildings, where its not so crowded, or a few larger ships above the city, but i think its alive as it is. Ok, just a few suggestions. :)

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draculaz ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 3:09 PM

danke rochr :)


Rochr ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 3:40 PM

Sie sind willkommen Drac. (or something like that) :)

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astromerc ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 3:59 PM

WOW Drac !!!! This is amazing all in wings! Truely grand stuff !


Vile ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 4:29 PM

the image is too big


Vile ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 4:29 PM

Actually that is sweet and I want em you should share with me Drac!


Erlik ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 4:32 PM

Oh, the modelling is excellent. Agree with Rochr about lights and colour. Make the windows yellow and/or bluish. And still think you shouold add some advertisements. :-) BUT pull that balcony up and towards the camera so you get a better composition. BTW, now that I downloaded Wings, I can really appreciate the skill needed to create something like this. Geez, talk about cryptic.

-- erlik


pakled ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 4:40 PM

I just wondered how you make all those tiny windows..;)

I wish I'd said that.. The Staircase Wit

anahl nathrak uth vas betude doth yel dyenvey..;)


ShawnDriscoll ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 4:58 PM

All the buildings have the same size rooms/windows and same color light blubs. The image is too small though to cover my studio wall.

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GROINGRINDER ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 5:02 PM

Needs some billboards with lights shining on them. Freestanding and on sides of buildings. Some color would look good too. Fantastic modeling!!!


Rochr ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 5:53 PM

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Yeah, heres a billboard sign for you man. Feel free to use it. ;)

Rudolf Herczog
Digital Artist
www.rochr.com


kimpe ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 5:58 PM

Great stuff Drac! How about all the above suggestions with some speeders close to the camera with some motion blur. Just my 2.


ysvry ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 6:52 PM

great city its begging for a godzilla versus the robot imho.

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pakled ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 7:45 PM

Wow..haven't seen an 'x' in a while, now it's NC-17 (you have to be 17 in this state to see it..;)

I wish I'd said that.. The Staircase Wit

anahl nathrak uth vas betude doth yel dyenvey..;)


drawbridgep ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 7:53 PM

[expletive deleted] that's [expletive deleted] [expletive deleted] excellent work you old [expletive deleted]. I just zoomed in on one of the windows. Naked chick dancing around. Now, that's insane detail.

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TheBryster ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 8:45 PM
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Claymor ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 9:01 PM

If I remember right the CGTalk challenge is about creating an image that has something to do with a monolithic moment in galactic history...The pic is great as is but...if it were me...and I was going for the galactic moment thing...I'd do a colorful assasination on the balcony and leave the rest of the image a seemingly monochromatic as it is. :)


Ardiva ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 9:05 PM

Super great job with Wings, Drac. Bravo my friend! :)



Zhann ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 9:11 PM

I love it, now I'm quitting the competition, can't beat this.....

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dvd_master ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 9:49 PM

Ooh, I think it looks great.


danamo ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 10:51 PM

Some super modeling and detail in this Drac! I am fond of the monochrome look here.


FuzzyShadows ( ) posted Sun, 14 November 2004 at 11:11 PM

That's one excellent sci-fi scene. There's a couple of spots that the lights show up dead on the building's corner, which takes a bit of the realism out of it. Hardly noticeable, yet it did stick out to me anyways. Nothing that a quick postwork can't fix. Everything else is grand.


draculaz ( ) posted Mon, 15 November 2004 at 3:33 AM

ROFLMAO! Rudy, I'll get you for that. Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, but soon and for the rest of your life! :P drac (call me rick)


RodsArt ( ) posted Mon, 15 November 2004 at 5:16 AM

Nice work rick, umm drac, um rick. Sky color for sure, with some traffic. I dunno man, that billboard's some pretty hot stuff. ;)

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Swade ( ) posted Mon, 15 November 2004 at 1:10 PM

Wonderful job so far Drac!!! I agree on adding a little color of some sort. Stars and a galaxy or nebulae maybe?

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pakled ( ) posted Mon, 15 November 2004 at 9:40 PM

play it, Sam...;) (Urban myth- play it again, Sam..never said in the movie..it's actually a title for a Woody Allen film..;)

I wish I'd said that.. The Staircase Wit

anahl nathrak uth vas betude doth yel dyenvey..;)


tresamie ( ) posted Mon, 15 November 2004 at 11:14 PM

The buildings are awfully bright...maybe tone them down a little and add a moon or two.

Fractals will always amaze me!


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