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Subject: WIP : Ben the Slave


lordstormdragon ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 6:05 PM · edited Sun, 12 January 2025 at 6:52 AM

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Almost had it with this one... Did some hair in post, and ran some filters. Anything else I should add or change or manipulate? (not really gonna title it "Ben the Slave", just called him Ben for some reason!) Thanks for lookin, ideas more than welcome on this one...


Zhann ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 6:16 PM

Kosaburo, has hair(s) for Mike and it's a free download...

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lordstormdragon ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 6:26 PM · edited Fri, 28 January 2005 at 6:28 PM

Aye, this is Mikey 2. So the hair sucks that bad? (grins) I've used Kosaburo hairs before, and have all the female hairs. But doing a 'Rosity search brought back no results. Off to Rhino to model a new hair, I'm so sick of using other people's props, anyway...

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drawbridgep ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 6:39 PM

Love that light. It's post or visible light? If I were him, I'd be resting against the wall. And probably slightly photosensitive, so prefers to be in shadows? Could be cool to just make him out in shadows?

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lordstormdragon ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 6:45 PM

The light is Bryce's true volumetrics. The glow effects you see come from a combination of KPT6 EQ, KPT5 Noize, and Flaming Pear Aetherize... I suppose I could put him in the shadows, but the point of this scene is also the volumetrics lights, which cast shadows through the bars and off Ben, our slave-boy. If I put him elsewhere, he wouldn't interrupt the lighting and cast cool shadows?


drawbridgep ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 6:51 PM

Fair 'nuff. I guess if he's trapped for that long, then maybe he likes to sit in the sun every second he can. The lighting really is phenoma.... phinom... wonderful.

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lordstormdragon ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 6:53 PM

Too bad the hair sucks, otherwise I'd be done with this atrocity!


drawbridgep ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 8:19 PM

Make him bald.

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erosiaart ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 8:20 PM

I like him in the lite.. gives that feeling of him holding onto the sun.. make him and the pillow dirty-ish.. they a bit too clean...


lordstormdragon ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 8:27 PM

(nods) Aye, Drawbridgep, he CAME bald! His head was too shiny... More dirt...? There's never enough dirt in 3D...


Hythshade ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 8:54 PM

Actually I think the hair looks pretty good :-) To me it's his back that looks a little off. I know that it would arch somewhat because he is in a slumped position, I just wonder if it would protrude that much. Don't get me wrong I really like this pic a lot!!! And I'm certainly no anatomy expert. So take it for what it's worth. I also agree that light is awesome :-)


GROINGRINDER ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 10:07 PM

I do not have any advice, but would be interested to see your hair modeling efforts in Rhino. Over at Poser Pros there are a few tuts and threads on Rhino hair modeling for Poser.


lordstormdragon ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 10:34 PM

Aye, I could not find ONE SINGLE MIKEY hair online, so GG, like they say in South Park : It's ON! I wouldn't say I'm an anatomy expert, Hythshade, but from the 3D view in Poser, it seemed convincing enough? Funny thing about the human body is that it never really looks right... Like if you try to draw a hand, and then draw from a REAL hand, the REAL hand always looks fake? Make any sense? GG, modeling hair in Rhino is butter, but I'll most likely despise making the damn texture maps...


Hythshade ( ) posted Fri, 28 January 2005 at 11:04 PM

Funny thing about the human body is that it never really looks right... Like if you try to draw a hand, and then draw from a REAL hand, the REAL hand always looks fake? Make any sense?

Makes perfect since my friend. Good luck with the hair.


tjohn ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 12:11 AM

LSD: Do you know the Kozaburo hair is at Digital Babes? It wasn't clear from your posts. There's a link on the Web Ring top 15 list on the sidebar.

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chohole ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 2:32 AM

Further to Tjohn's post..koz's long hair, messy hair,long hair evolution and short hair evolution all come with mat poses to fit them staright onto mike.

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Kemal ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 3:30 AM

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Hey LSD, great looking scene, sir :D

Not trying to be picky, but his back is little bit bended un-naturally, simple postwork (like cloning or equal to that) can fix that, like in example above, sorry for altering your image, if you wish, I'll remove it...

Other than that, excellent work ! :D


pumecobann ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 7:10 AM

LSD;

I wanted to tell you that this image is s*ite, but I won't 'cos it's good :-D

I also like the effect of it's lighting.

As for idea's, how about some sort of sybolic model on the floor, which I suppose he could have built from the bones out of boredom?

I dunno, I'm inspirationally challenged.

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RodsArt ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 7:48 AM

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Great Image LSD. I agree with Kemal, human back does round more in this position. Posers are tough, the back, shoulders & joints rarely do what you want them to do. Excellent work!

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PJF ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 8:58 AM

The volumetric light is superbly done, and the image has great potential. A few suggestions: The shadow pattern from the window bars indicates the light source is just outside; this isn't realistic for an 'infinitely distant' source like the sun. This could be easily corrected in a new render, but a downside to that would be a smaller, less impressive area of illumination in the image (both in the 'air' and on the ground). This throws up a compositional opportunity. Leave the light source where it is and have it not be the sun. Rather than Ben sitting there passively, have him reaching toward the strange light in wonder and hope. This would contrast nicely with the desolation of his surroundings, giving a religious type impression. With that in mind, reassemble the human bones into a skeleton and place that 'in the shadows' (replacing the scatter with general detritus). This would make the bones/skeleton a more obvious statement of a likely doom/destiny for Ben, as well as making it look less like Ben has been feeding on the remains of a cellmate. Enable soft-shadows. The hard-edged ones clash with the lovely soft light in the image, and scream '3D'. Maybe make the bars on the window thinner. The post-worked hair isn't too bad (a bit too contrasty for that part of the image, and a bit too groomed) but the biggest problem is that it doesn't cast a shadow. Ben's back and shoulders are lit as if his head were bald (as in the straight render). If you go for a 'ready' 3D hair rather than making one (or better integration of post), I recommend "Grace Lion Hair" by Quarker in the store here. It's very adaptable, and can be made to look bedraggled and unkempt. It'll be a purchase ($8.95) so you'll feel quite justified in using it in your image(s). It's fairly straightforward to fit to alternative figures, and the process will give you that feeling of involvement you desire ;-). I agree with the others about the back posture error. The butt area of Poser figures is quite tough to get right. It often remains persistently J-Lo when it's bent, and it's a challenge. You like a challenge... ;-)


Claymor ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 12:01 PM

I think the problem with the hair is that it defies gravity...the curl in it could go behind an ear but I don't see one there...the flow of it looks like it comes from his face, round his head and down the neck...hang some stuff straight down through that curved area and see what it looks like. I agree that the back needs to be convex rather than concave. The hand also looks not quite right. Having said all THAT.... The lighting and texturing are spot on...it will be finishing off the posing that makes or breaks it.


pakled ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 2:31 PM

Attached Link: http://DigitalBabes2.com/

He has 3 sites (Kozaburo), here's one..;) Just think for a moment; this is a slave, half-n$kaed, down and out...c'mon, the dudes' hair is gonna be a *mess!*..;) looks fine by me.

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alvinylaya ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 5:32 PM

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I think the hair could use more highlights where the sun hits it. It depends on which cage he's in but if it was in the Chateau Diif or something similar, he'd probably grow a beard of some sort. I really like the whole composition, and your play of positive and negative spaces. The volumetric light is superb, you really get that shimer that makes you squint. I hope you don't mind me altering the image, if you do I'll remove it immediately :-)


gammaRascal ( ) posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 7:33 PM

great job with the volumetrics! my only picky-point are all the bones. i mean, even I would clean-up a little if i was stuck in there. maybe shove them more against the wall. love it though.




lordstormdragon ( ) posted Sun, 30 January 2005 at 5:38 PM

(grins at Everyone!) I guess my ebot lost this one, I had no idea so many people were responding...! All of these are great suggestions. I have been to DigitalBabes, and found nothing remotely Mikey-like. But since I'd already started modeling hair in Rhino, I just stopped looking... I won $10 from a little in-thread contest a few days back, I think I'm gonna go for PJF's idea. (by the way, PJF, it's good to see your name in here these days!) And Alvin, I don't mind at all... I needed help, and thank you for your idea, I agree completely... Only problem with enabling SS on the volume light is that it kills the volumetrics, completely. I DO like the idea of him not moping, but hoping... Can anyone tell I'm feeling isolated and lonely, these days? Thanks for all your support and help and ideas, my friends. Makes me feel good...


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