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Subject: A nice suprise

Claymor opened this issue on Apr 28, 2005 ยท 8 posts
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Claymor ( ) posted Thu, 28 April 2005 at 12:53 AM ยท edited Thu, 09 January 2025 at 1:50 PM

My 11 year old son left a school paper on the counter the other day...one of those deals where they have to create a short story using all their spelling words. I LOVED his last two lines: "Life begins its evaporation from the day we're born. There's a lot of friction between then and death." Just thought I'd share a proud daddy moment. :)

dido6 ( ) posted Thu, 28 April 2005 at 12:56 AM

:) Thank you for sharing that! Seems your son is already off onto a brilliant career in words! I love that! :) Diana

dialyn ( ) posted Thu, 28 April 2005 at 6:30 AM

Now there's a turn of phrase that I am envious of. I understand why you are so proud. :)

japes ( ) posted Thu, 28 April 2005 at 7:20 AM

11? awesome.

hanevi ( ) posted Thu, 28 April 2005 at 9:30 AM

I'm impressed! Congratulations to your son from me.

ibassplayer205 ( ) posted Thu, 28 April 2005 at 1:01 PM

So what were the spelling words? Between and Begins? JUST KIDDING!! Reminds me of myself as a kid (although Im still only 20).

garblesnix ( ) posted Thu, 28 April 2005 at 2:02 PM

Sounds like it would also be a superb opening to a story, long or short.
Keep the paper.
First editions are valuable 8^)

NothingNess ( ) posted Fri, 29 April 2005 at 8:45 AM

You should be proud! Very impressive line indeed.

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