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Subject: Triptych


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 6:55 AM · edited Thu, 09 January 2025 at 10:38 PM

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Well it seems lots of people trying new things lately. So I am posting what I have been trying out. I would like to guage a few reactions get any feedback - good or bad - ways it could be better -what you like dislike etc. This has been drastically reduced for in here - each panel measures 3061x4596 pixels and the background could be anything I just chose this colour wall for it.

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 7:29 AM

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Here is a detail of a panel

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


azy ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 8:40 AM

I really like what you have done here, it give the viewer a sense of motion

Eggiwegs! I would like... to smash them!


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 8:46 AM

Thx azy that is what I was hoping to achieve I am pleased you saw it that way too. :)

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 10:17 AM

Great sense of motion and I think it would great hanging on a wall. For an online image at the size you have here, they are not really different enough to warrant 3 of them. I think 1 larger one would be great in your gallery. But as I said, printed out and hung up, 3 three of them would work really well. Just my 2.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


cynlee ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 11:22 AM

luv the soft, impressionistic look & presentation a lot! would look good big to see the detail as kort pointed out, but i dislike the orange background... just my honest opinion :]


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 11:25 AM · edited Thu, 19 May 2005 at 11:29 AM

yep one of the reasons I have not put in the gallery - just not compatible with showing here, I don't want to make it large enough to see because then people would have to scroll which rather defeats a lot of the purpose.
we crossed there cyn. - yeah looking at it the tangerine background is a bit...............lol you know I have no artistic flair so suggest a colours if anyone wants to. Message edited on: 05/19/2005 11:28

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 11:35 AM

or suggest other ways of doing it........ I like three pics because it shows the movement - they are all swaying different ways. One pic although it looks ok doesn't do that.

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


tvernuccio ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 11:35 AM

i like this, Richard. it's dreamy and very beautiful. certainly does convey a sense of motion but at the same time, i kind wish it had a bit more detail. maybe if i saw all of it together as a whole i would feel differently. do you mind to post another piece? i'm particularly interested in seeing the left portion of the foreground in the middle piece. thanks, Richard!


tvernuccio ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 11:39 AM

looks like i crossed with you & Cindy. you DO have artistic flare, Richard!!!!! :) for a background color, i'd choose a dark lavendar color.


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 11:43 AM

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Left foreground centre panel

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


tvernuccio ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 12:15 PM

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thanks, Richard! what was catching my eye was that darker bit of green down in the bottom...love that. it's all about what YOU like, really. i hope you don't mind me playing. sometimes i have a hard time describing what i'd change. when i went in PSP, i increased the contrast to 25. now i like it a lot better. that's just my personal preference though. :)


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 12:25 PM

Thx Shiela - yeah it increases the colours a bit too :) These are not manipulated before hand so lots of possibilities with a bit of postwork. You had me really curious then as to why you wanted that bit in particular :D

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


tvernuccio ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 12:53 PM

oh wow...i thought you used a motion blur on it. my mistake! yep...lots of possibilities for sure! that's part i asked you to show...it's the part where my eyes went to first. the way i read this one...well, i started at that point and then went up in a counter-clockwise direction.


Damia ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 1:06 PM

Those are amazing! Personally, I like a lot of color and would probably do the contrast that Shiela did. Just me though. If you are going for a soft look, then that's different. As for the background, I usually sample a color from the image. Here I would sample a dark purple from it or a light purple (lavender). Try both and see which compliments the images best. I would love to have those hanging on my wall! I really like purple.....my whole bedroom is purple; walls, carpet, curtains, bedspread. heh heh. Got off topic.....anyway, I would love to see the different variations you come up with if you play with it more. :)

~Damia~ LeviathanPhotography


tibet2004uk ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 1:07 PM

I really like this Rich!!! As Sheila said, I would increase the saturation a 'lil but other than that, I just love the compo the way it is! This is creative and beautiful! Yep!!


tibet2004uk ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 1:09 PM

Oh yea, the background, well, I don't have any suggestion about that so...that orange doesn't really bother me I must say! I makes the green stands out!


Michelle A. ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 2:38 PM

Very beautiful Rich..... I like it as a tryp...... must've been quite a wind.... How long of a shutter speed did you use....?

I am, therefore I create.......
--- michelleamarante.com


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 2:43 PM

Thx Michelle I have been trying quite a few of these shots recently. Means waiting for the right wind and poor light. Then polarizer and ND filters to get 1 sec.

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


cynlee ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 3:12 PM

gee... i hope i wasn't too blunt... sometimes i can do that... sorry Richard :] prefer it as a tryp too


Onslow ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 3:32 PM

No no no cyn not blunt at all. I didn't really give much thought to the background, I was pleased with the images, then it occured to me I would have too put them on a background to put them on here otherwise they would not be how I wanted them to be arranged. Just sorta picked a colour for no reason particularly - I am not going to be painting my walls orange to display these ;) I had in mind printing them up really large to use as a screen or canvas prints with no outer frame just stretched onto the inner frame and hung up on the wall.

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html


cynlee ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 3:58 PM

now THAT'S a cool idea!!! think it would look awesome Rich!! :D i have one of my daughter on canvas... turned out pretty good


kimariehere ( ) posted Thu, 19 May 2005 at 9:40 PM

put the background color in black or dark viloet..then it will be perfect.

kimmers ♥ :O)


coolj001 ( ) posted Sat, 21 May 2005 at 12:17 AM

beautiful triptych.


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