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Subject: Hi! Please let me know what you think!

digitalgrey opened this issue on Jun 06, 2005 · 3 posts
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digitalgrey ( ) posted Mon, 06 June 2005 at 9:13 AM · edited Tue, 19 November 2024 at 12:45 PM

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Please give an opinion, it would really be appreciated whether good or bad. Thankyou Graeme

www.digitalgrey.co.nr

SusiQ ( ) posted Thu, 09 June 2005 at 1:05 AM

Very nice. Words are very expressive. That sentence "Two poisoned tongues leave two broken hearts." is amazing. It brings the mental imagery to life. Maybe you can make the next one flow a little smoother? Just my humble opinion though. Keep up the great work...

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!

digitalgrey ( ) posted Mon, 13 June 2005 at 3:43 AM

Thanks so much I really value the comment

www.digitalgrey.co.nr

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