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Subject: My short in progress - Hit me, and Crit me!

pentamiter_beastmete opened this issue on Jan 21, 2006 · 4 posts
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pentamiter_beastmete ( ) posted Sat, 21 January 2006 at 2:48 PM · edited Sun, 03 November 2024 at 4:03 PM

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Some of you may have seen me spam this about the LW forum from time to time, but for those who haven't, please take a look, and crit away. No kid gloves now! Be Honest! Thanx in advance.

nemirc ( ) posted Sun, 22 January 2006 at 9:55 AM

I watched the trailers and they are cool, no complains there. I did feel the model was too "hard-edged", and you could have used more contrast as well :p

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Miss Nancy ( ) posted Sun, 22 January 2006 at 10:30 PM

the two trailers? they are good, but there were too many "fade-to-blacks" in trailer 1. the target demographic for commercial films has a 5-second attention span, hence they usually use some USC film school cleeshay for the transitions (a flash of light, rapid motion blur) to hold the dims' attention between cuts. "fade-to-blacks" will lose the dims, which is cool if you want to please the critics. trailer 2 had a scene with an out-of-focus wall on the lower left, but it looked more like a lo-res 3D tex than out-of-focus, d-o-f effect, so I would change the texture on the wall there to something else.


luvver_3d ( ) posted Fri, 27 January 2006 at 5:27 PM · edited Fri, 27 January 2006 at 5:29 PM

There isn't much to crit here except possibly the editing, as mentioned. The style is great, and the animation is solid from what I can see. I love the camera work.

On the negative, definitely too many fades; too soon and too often in most of the shots. As a trailer, I don't think you're letting some of the shots progress far enough to tease the viewer. The editing seems more frustrating than appetizing.

Message edited on: 01/27/2006 17:29

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