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Subject: Spring Haiku?

TheAlex opened this issue on Mar 14, 2006 ยท 202 posts
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Margana ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 4:09 PM

LMAO!Again!Nope. Yours came first!You win,lol. ;^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 4:17 PM

Grass against my cheek I breathe in the sweet green scent And I am reborn.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

SndCastie ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 5:06 PM

LOL yea I have always had trouble spelling


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven

SndCastie ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 5:08 PM

Reborn flowers grow Again their beauty they show So take a picture


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 5:50 PM ยท edited Thu, 30 March 2006 at 5:55 PM

Picture perfect day
Filled with warm,golden sunshine
Bathing you in light. LOL.Like all good things,this must eventually end somewhere,I should think!Since I am new here,I have no idea when that is. Do you know? PS I have so loved this!Maybe it should 'end' with the word,'end'. Just a suggestion...and believe me,I would be just as happy to continue.

Message edited on: 03/30/2006 17:55

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

SndCastie ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 6:07 PM

LOL This is my first time so not sure how they work it


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 6:37 PM

Me too,lol. Guess we could ask the moderator,or the one who started this thread,(TheAlex).Evidently there was a winter one,but it wasn't archived,so we can't see how long that one went...but that would give us a good idea. :^) I'll attempt a search...

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

SndCastie ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 6:40 PM

Ok thanks


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 6:47 PM

Okay.LOL!The last one went to 85 so I guess we're 'cool'! ;^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

SndCastie ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 9:06 PM

Light of the morning glistens on the blooming buds Opening them full


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 9:52 PM

Full of such splendor? Then fill me and I shall sing Like never before. :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 9:22 AM

Before dawn we rise Pushing up from soil and stone Fragile tendrils sprout.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

netsia ( ) posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 10:25 AM

sprout in all glory search for warm rays of the sun bud with sweet fragrance

TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 11:01 AM

Fragrance of new life The blooms begin to open Worshipping hot sun.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 12:48 PM

Sun of my childhood Endless days without a care And joy everywhere.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

SndCastie ( ) posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 12:58 PM ยท edited Fri, 31 March 2006 at 12:59 PM

Everywhere blooming
beautiful colorful buds
coming more each day

Message edited on: 03/31/2006 12:59


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven

TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 1:21 PM

Day becomes cool night A refreshing time to grow Mild rainstorms pass.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 4:34 PM

Pass the time slowly Savouring the sweet bouquets Carried on the wind.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

jstro ( ) posted Sat, 01 April 2006 at 11:05 PM

Wind carries earth scent; New soil, so freshly turned. Plow cuts deep. Birds feast. Works if you give soil two syllables. A little poetic license.

ย 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

SndCastie ( ) posted Sat, 01 April 2006 at 11:31 PM

Feast on the hue of beautiful colors new the coming of dawn


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven

TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 03 April 2006 at 4:23 PM

Dawn breaks over hills All is wet with dew and mist Time to awaken.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Fri, 07 April 2006 at 2:56 PM

Awaken and see All the new life around you Green and full of youth. ________________________________________________________ "Is there another word for thesaurus?"

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 9:39 AM

Youth blooms underfoot
Beryl grass and vivid bud
Terra firma's joy. :m_grin:

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 1:32 PM

Joy in it's splendor
Sunshine and celadon skies
And softย  scents of Spring.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 2:28 PM ยท edited Wed, 12 April 2006 at 2:29 PM

Spring bling flower jems
Golden blooms adorn the hills
Bees in their rapture.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

netsia ( ) posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 10:32 PM

rapture in lyric

jonquils harmonize yellow

sun completes the tuneย 

Margana ( ) posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 11:25 PM

Tune in...there's music
In the whisper of the leaves
The song of silence.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 8:34 AM

Silence everywhere
Nothing stirs in shrouded mists
Dawn is approaching.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 11:56 AM

Approachingย  sunset
Painted byย  the setting sun
The world is aglow.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 12:00 PM ยท edited Thu, 13 April 2006 at 12:02 PM

Aglow from within
Fanning the spark of new life
Rekindled embers.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 12:42 PM

Embers of mem'ries
Softly stirring...restoring
Coloring the day.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 12:50 PM

Day growing longer
Snow melts and grasses turn green
The end of winter.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 4:27 PM

Winter...time of sleep
Awakens to find the world
Stretching t'ward the sun.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 14 April 2006 at 11:47 AM

Sun growing warmer
Golden rays caress the Earth
Rekindles life's song.

Thought for the day on how our perceptions color our world:
"Once upon a time a man whose ax was missing suspected his neighbor's son.The boy walked like a thief, looked like a thief, and spoke like a thief. But the man found his ax while digging in the valley, and the next time he saw his neighbor's son, the boy walked, looked and spoke like any other child."
-Lao-tzu, philosopher (6th century BCE)

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Fri, 14 April 2006 at 1:46 PM

Song of the sparrows
Babbling brooks and buzzing bees
Spring's sweet symphony.
ย 

Wise words,Kortalouche-san. :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 17 April 2006 at 1:51 PM

Symphony tuning Nature's instruments abound Begin the chorus.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

jstro ( ) posted Mon, 17 April 2006 at 5:13 PM

Chorus of labor.
Scritch-scritch scratch of hoe and rake.
Time for the garden.

jon

ย 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Margana ( ) posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 6:25 AM

Garden...sweet haven
Serenity in the tending
Stillness for the soul.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 8:28 AM

Soul of the landscape Myriad lifeforms renewed Season of rebirth.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 11:20 AM

Rebirth...when the earth
Ready and warm and waiting
Embraces the seed.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 11:38 AM

Seed bud pome grain Embryonic spark of life Conception kernel.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 11:48 AM

Kernel,germ of life
Moistened and nurtured by earth
Finds strength in her arms.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 12:13 PM

Arms closely entwined Holding life close to her breast Too soon it runs free...

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 1:45 PM

Free as the sweet breeze
Touching each leaf and flower
Caressing the trees.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

SusiQ ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 3:59 AM

Trees swaying softly
Brimming green buds bursting through
Baby birds chirping

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!

TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:18 AM ยท edited Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:20 AM

Chirping frogs spawning Tadpoles mass along the shore Squirming, churning sparks.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations

Margana ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:27 AM

Sparks the hollow soul
Igniting dormant mem'ries
The spring of my youth.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog

"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno

SusiQ ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:53 AM

Youth is made for spring
Boundless joyful energy
Leaping lambs so white

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!

SusiQ ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:55 AM

Youth is made for spring
Boundless joyful energy
Leaping lambs so white

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!

SusiQ ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:56 AM

Youth is made for spring
Boundless joyful energy
Leaping lambs so white

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!

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