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Subject: Spring Haiku?


SusiQ ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:00 AM

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


SusiQ ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:04 AM

Youth is made for spring
Boundless joyful energy
Leaping lambs so white

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:09 AM

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Youth is wasted Frittered away lazily Spring's a short season.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:37 AM ยท edited Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:38 AM

Oops, looks like we really were posting here and cross posted in the process, lol. I guess we need to practice patience when the Forum has one of it's little hiccups.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 10:09 AM

ย I guess we should use Susi's...since hers came in first.

Do you want to have a go at it,Kortalouche?

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 10:28 AM

Nope, you go ahead...I used my turn already. 'White' sounds more fun than 'season' anyway. :o]

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 10:39 AM

Okie dokey :^)

White gypsophelia
Tiny little clouds of bloom
Soft as baby's breath.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 4:16 PM

Breath now quickening Heartbeat of Gaia grows strong Pulse of life renewed.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


L8RDAZE ( ) posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 6:46 PM

Renewed energies
Radiate the land... bring life
Nature is reborn






SusiQ ( ) posted Thu, 20 April 2006 at 12:54 AM

Sorry about the mess up above. The PC kept freezing and it looked as if the posting hadn't uploaded. Hugs and apologies. Is there any way to remove the extra postings?

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


SusiQ ( ) posted Thu, 20 April 2006 at 12:56 AM

Reborn into life
New season that is crisp green
Growing tender buds

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 20 April 2006 at 12:10 PM ยท edited Thu, 20 April 2006 at 12:11 PM

Buds along the branch Spiral outward into life Open for the sun.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 20 April 2006 at 5:31 PM

SusiQ---No worries.As far as deleting,15ย  minutes after posting,you can no longer delete.Sorry to say.:^/

Sun blankets the land
In soft hues of pink and gold
Her sweet kiss 'good night'.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


netsia ( ) posted Mon, 24 April 2006 at 11:44 AM

night, when the darkness

conceals the frenzyย of Spring

new buds apoppin'


Margana ( ) posted Mon, 24 April 2006 at 12:10 PM

Apoppin' with life
Youthful energy and joy
In each bud and bloom.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 2:37 AM

Bloom and bud alike
Stretch achingly to the sun
The pain that is growth.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 10:10 AM

Growth starts slowly now Gaining momentum swiftly Seed to bloom so fast. ----- not my best effort...but what I could come up with for now... I hate to see you Haikuing to yourself. ;oP

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 1:48 PM

LOL,taking pity on me,eh?Do I look pathetic???? ;^)

Okay,hmmm....

Fast the years go by
Savor the sweetness of Spring
She is quick to pass.

(Not my best,either,lol...)


"What uses having a great depth of field, if there is not an adequate depth of feeling?"----W.Eugene Smith

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 2:43 PM

Pass gas sassafrass This thread's a pain in the ass Summer please hurry. just kidding around... :lol: :laugh: :rolleyes: :tt2: :woot: :m_laugh: :m_bouncy: :m_blush: :m_coolsmirk: :m_tongue2: :m_wave: -----

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 2:55 PM

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What would RR do without you?You crack me up.:lol:

Hurry!Oh!What to do!
Never meant to 'bother' you!

Was this fast enough?
:tongue2:

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 3:31 PM

Enough rain and dirt Fat mud pies for you and you Time to wash the floors.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 4:13 PM

Ummmmmย  methinks there was quite a different haiku here before I went out.ย  LOL ;^P

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 5:23 PM

Floors of hard-packed earth
Giveย  way to carpets of green
Heaven underfoot.

Sigh...'Floors' was a tough one...

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


jstro ( ) posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 9:09 PM

Underfoot, lichen.
Tiny miracles of life.
Go light of foot here.

ย 

jon

ย 

ย 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 8:44 AM

Here, there, everywhere Shoots of green burst from the earth "DON'T WALK ON THE GRASS!" ----Okay, I guess that is getting a bit silly...

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 11:10 AM

Grass andย  garden hose
So simple and yet young ones
Giggle with delight.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 12:44 PM

Delight with the sight. A tree growing wide and tall. Yep. Size does matter.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 12:57 PM

Matter...there's a word
That could kill this thread for sure ;^)
So I'll ignore it.

LOL.


i want to be just like e.e.cummings.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


Drekinn ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 4:05 PM

Matter, organic.
It embodies our planet.
Come Spring, it renews.


Hi all, saw a challenge here and thought I'd contribute. This is fun. :)

Drekinn.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
ย 


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 5:20 PM

Glad you did!Hope you continue to play along!


Today's subliminal thought:

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


Drekinn ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 5:39 PM

It seems I was wrong.
How cleverly contrived,
Your former reply.


Sorry, Margana. I've just now realised that your previous post was in fact a witty remark in haiku-style. :pย  Very well executed too. :)

Drekinn

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
ย 


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 6:13 PM

Reply freely friend!
It should be about the spring
So we'll use 'renews'. ;^)


No problem,Drekinn.I was stumped...and we haven't had that many 'players'...

Yours is wonderful.I hope I can come up with something for 'renews' now,lol!


Everybody should believe something
I believe I'll have more coffee.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


jstro ( ) posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 8:45 PM

Renews hope in heart,
These crisp blue skies and cool nights,
New warbler, on wing.

ย 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 01 May 2006 at 9:21 AM

Wing, sing, balancing An owls hoot marks its silent flight Finding food for young. --------------- Hey, nice...some more people have joined in again!

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Mon, 01 May 2006 at 10:53 AM

Young and old alike
Find glory in the moment
Hope is on the wind.


"Tut, tut, child! Everything's got a moral, if only you can find it."-The Duchess ( Alice in Wonderland )

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


willothewhisp ( ) posted Mon, 01 May 2006 at 9:17 PM

Wind blows soft then strong,

Rain falling , April showers

Warm sun, summer soon


Margana ( ) posted Tue, 02 May 2006 at 2:43 AM

Soon I will be gone
Like the Spring my days are few
And too quickly passed.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


willothewhisp ( ) posted Tue, 02 May 2006 at 6:29 AM

passed over, left behind

spring burgeons into summer

new joys, no regrets


Margana ( ) posted Tue, 02 May 2006 at 8:24 AM

Regrets...I've but one
Not standing still long enough
Before spring was done.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 02 May 2006 at 9:25 AM

Done with cold winter Icy fingers loose their hold Energized rebirth!

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


SusiQ ( ) posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 5:32 AM

Rebirth and reborn
This life of mine soars upwards
As the eagle high.

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 10:49 AM

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High climbs the sky vine Towards sun it streches up Leafy abundance.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 1:54 PM

Abundance of green
And yellow dandelions
Like so many suns.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 2:50 PM ยท edited Wed, 03 May 2006 at 2:51 PM

Sons and daughters, rise Gaia beckons you too her Join the eternal ---- Took liberties with "suns" ;o]

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 3:05 PM

Eternal lovers
Sun and moon chase eachother
Across the heavens.


Okay I took liberties, too.It's not exactly about Spring...But it's what popped into my head.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 3:11 PM

Heavens to Betsy! Maw, it's time to plant the corn. Where's mah overalls? ---------- (if "overalls" isn't a thread killer, I don't know what is!)

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 04 May 2006 at 12:06 AM

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay will take liberties once again,lol...

Overall not bad
The chance to renew yourself
And forget the past.


If someone wants to grab 'overalls' please be my guest!

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 04 May 2006 at 8:31 AM

Past becomes present Day rolls into evening Put the kids to bed. ------ Nice recovery! :m_thumbu:

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


willothewhisp ( ) posted Thu, 04 May 2006 at 4:03 PM

Bed is for deaming

Recharging, for tomorrow

Is another day


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 04 May 2006 at 6:20 PM

Day of sweet pleasures
Spent in grateful solitude
Among the heather.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


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