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Subject: Summer Haiku?


Drekinn ( ) posted Thu, 25 May 2006 at 1:54 AM · edited Thu, 25 May 2006 at 1:56 AM

Seeps through my clothing,
Trickles down from head to toe.
Sweat - an endless flow.

--

Kort: 6-8-6 ? I think you should get your syllables checked - it could be something serious. :blink:

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 


TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 25 May 2006 at 11:24 AM

6-8-6...I was just trying to one-up everyone, heheh. Thanks for pointing that out, sorry. Flow lazily past Hammered silver ribbon twist Hot, sunny river

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 9:51 AM

Strange...I never got a single ebot for these...


River flows like silk
Slipping softly over stone
Smoothed by her caress.


Too bad I can't post Andreas' upload with this one...

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 10:08 AM

Carress of zephyr Tousles malachite leaflets Woodland breeze playful.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 11:08 AM

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Playful children laugh In Daddy's arms as they soar O'er  warm summer waves.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 1:06 PM · edited Fri, 26 May 2006 at 1:07 PM

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Waves concuss on sand Undualating to and fro A coastal massage.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 1:20 PM · edited Fri, 26 May 2006 at 1:29 PM

Massage of the sea
Gentle waves urging softly
Come,be one with me.


Lovely shot,Kort.

(I prefer ,'massaged by the sea',but oh well.)  :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 1:37 PM · edited Fri, 26 May 2006 at 1:39 PM

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Me'thinks it is time Drawing myself a hot bath Relax after toil. ____________ "by the sea" would have been idea, but it work, and works well. =] Luv your painting/pastel image too.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 2:44 PM

Toil takes it's toll
Exhausting body and soul
Seeking sweet release.


Thanks,Mr.D. :^)
Love the foamy beard.Your son is adorable.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 2:51 PM · edited Fri, 26 May 2006 at 2:52 PM

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Release me from care Weekend forgets work's pressures Head for the Border!

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


jstro ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 2:53 PM

Release song within.
For freedom comes at long last!
Graduation day.

My daughter graduates from high school tonight. Hooray!
~jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


jstro ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 2:54 PM

Sorry for the cross post. TwoPynts has it with Border as the next word.

~jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 2:57 PM

No worries, that is a great graduation haiku. Congrats to your daughter and your family, what a night!!! :thumbupboth:

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 3:43 PM

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Border of blossoms Purple,pink and royal blue Paint the path with bloom.

__________________________________________-
What a happy occasion,Jon.My best to you all.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 26 May 2006 at 4:10 PM

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Blooms like canon fire Hills adorned with wildflower Nature's best dress on.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Drekinn ( ) posted Sat, 27 May 2006 at 2:18 AM · edited Sat, 27 May 2006 at 2:19 AM

On route to the beach,
Playing 'I Spy' in the car.
A family chore.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 


TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 30 May 2006 at 9:29 AM · edited Tue, 30 May 2006 at 9:32 AM

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Chores done, time to rest. Sipping iced tea on the porch Cubes clink in the glass. ___________ I hope everyone had a great Memorial Day long weekend (for you USAers).

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Tue, 30 May 2006 at 11:39 AM

Mmmm...sounds nice.


Glass of cool water
Might feel even better if
Poured over my head. :^/


It's reeeeeeeeally hot here,lol...and the AC is busted...yuck...sniff...:crying:

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 30 May 2006 at 12:40 PM

Head on over to... ...the pool! Splish splash, dive on in. Good times have returned! __________ Sorry to hear about your AC Marlene, hope this helps. =]

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Tue, 30 May 2006 at 1:53 PM

That would be so lovely...sigh...


Returned to the sea
Where comfort comes in soft waves
Of cool velvet foam.


Yuck.I think even my brain is hot.Somebody put me out of my misery...lol.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 30 May 2006 at 4:04 PM · edited Tue, 30 May 2006 at 4:05 PM

Foam flecks parted lips. A soft belch next issues forth. Cool, refreshing beer. _________ How about that Marlene? :) Lovely haiku by the way.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Tue, 30 May 2006 at 4:19 PM

Aw.Thanks...you know how I'm struggling here,lol.


Beer...sounds pretty good
Especially when icy cold
Wish I had some now.


Or anything cold for that matter...And wouldn't you know,I have to get dressed up for an event this evening.It's awful getting dressed up when the AC is busted!

Grrr...Damn you Murphy and your law!

;^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


jstro ( ) posted Tue, 30 May 2006 at 7:02 PM · edited Tue, 30 May 2006 at 7:03 PM

Now the sweet birds sing.
Joyous songs to greet the dawn,
Wake me from my sleep.


Hopefully the event you are going to has AC. If so, maybe you can camp out there.

~jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


Drekinn ( ) posted Wed, 31 May 2006 at 1:25 AM

Sleep you can no more,
Humid claws asphyxiate,
Moist beads overwhelm.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 


TwoPynts ( ) posted Wed, 31 May 2006 at 2:12 PM · edited Wed, 31 May 2006 at 2:14 PM

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Overwhelmed chroma Vivid hues sear watchful eyes Water lily opens.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Thu, 01 June 2006 at 4:58 PM

Opens and closes...
The lilies silent secrets
In the pale moonlight.


Simply lovely,once again,Kortalouche.Love that shot.

I had a hard time with 'opens'...Sorry.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 02 June 2006 at 10:49 AM

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Moonlight spatters pond Frogs croak raspy mating calls Sultry mist rising. __________ *"Sit down and put down everything that comes into your head and then you're a writer. But an author is one who can judge his own stuff's worth, without pity, and destroy most of it."* -Colette, writer (1873-1954)

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Fri, 02 June 2006 at 2:31 PM

Rising with the tide
The silver moon sheds her light
On the glistening bay.


It works if you prononunce it as 'glist'ning'.

Love the quote Kortalouchie.,and the moody pic.  :^)


If you can't hear me, it's because I'm in parentheses.
Steven Wright

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 02 June 2006 at 3:26 PM

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Bay, thyme, rosemary Heat up the coals, spark the gas, Time to barbeque. __________ Sorry Marlene, not the best word to leave it on. ;]

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Drekinn ( ) posted Sat, 03 June 2006 at 1:00 AM

Barbeque ignites,
Snags and shrimp sizzle on flames;
Balmy evening meal.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 


Margana ( ) posted Sat, 03 June 2006 at 3:48 AM

Meal on the terrace
Watching the blushing sun set
A perfect day ends.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 05 June 2006 at 9:43 AM

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Ends with a big bang! Fourth of July fireworks. Vivid painted sky. ________ Good ones you two, you're making me hungry!

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Drekinn ( ) posted Mon, 05 June 2006 at 8:58 PM

Sky so deep and blue,
Into which I wish to dive,
Submerged and alive.

--

That ever elusive celestial swimming pool, so tempting, yet so far.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 


TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 06 June 2006 at 9:56 AM

Alive, senses hum. Tingles swarm across tan skin Explode from the pool. ------ Sorry, could not get away from the pool theme, didn't quite know where to take it. :m_think:

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Drekinn ( ) posted Wed, 07 June 2006 at 6:35 AM

Pool of soothing silk,
Through its cool embrace I glide,
Dousing skin ablaze.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 


hanevi ( ) posted Thu, 08 June 2006 at 4:13 AM

ablaze on my face,
molten gold from burning sky
sears my cringing skin

I've been out the last ten days. It rained all the time there, and it was misty and green, and the birds were happy. Now I'm back in soot-choked life in the fast lane. Hooray! :(


TwoPynts ( ) posted Thu, 08 June 2006 at 1:26 PM

Skin cooled by soft breeze, Top down, hale engine murmurs, Drive in the country. _________ Welcome back hanevi? :/

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


hanevi ( ) posted Fri, 09 June 2006 at 3:08 AM

country bumpkins sweat,
office goers perspire too;
summer knows no caste.

Thanks TwoPynts!

'Perspire' could be 2 or 3 syllables depending on how it's pronounced. Sorry next! 'Caste' is a tough one!


TwoPynts ( ) posted Fri, 09 June 2006 at 11:35 AM

Caste chosen at birth, Worker ants swarm the blanket, Picnic invaded. ______ Thanks for the challenge hanevi! =]

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Drekinn ( ) posted Sat, 10 June 2006 at 7:35 PM

Invaded by Sol,
Radiating rays of pain,
Aimed towards the Earth.

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 


hanevi ( ) posted Mon, 12 June 2006 at 2:05 AM

earth baked hard,
sun's pitiless rage;
famine looms

I wonder if there will be deaths again in my part of the world...

Great work with 'caste', TwoP!

 


TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 12 June 2006 at 3:07 PM · edited Mon, 12 June 2006 at 3:14 PM

Loom bodily weaves, Intricate home of spun silk, Chrystallis commence. _____________ Thanks hanevi! =]

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Mon, 12 June 2006 at 3:26 PM

Commence the party
Salsa music stirs the air
With hot steamy beats.


Hmmm I haven't gotten any ebots for this...
Thanks for the gentle reminder,Kortalouche.
Sorry this one's so stinky.I'm a bit out of practice I think,lol.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 12 June 2006 at 3:38 PM

Beats pound from drumskin, Primal rythms gyrate hips, Sweat gleams - fevered skin. --------- I've been missing ebots from the Forums too Marlene, you aren't alone.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana ( ) posted Mon, 12 June 2006 at 11:56 PM

Skin all aglisten
Sweetly scented with oil
And bronzed by the sun.


K. Thanks Kortalouche. :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


hanevi ( ) posted Tue, 13 June 2006 at 4:14 AM · edited Tue, 13 June 2006 at 4:15 AM

sun and sand,
blue, sparkling water,
then ice-cream...

Can't think of anything profound, so this little one to celebrate the simple, Ordinary. :)

Hi there, Margana!


Margana ( ) posted Tue, 13 June 2006 at 8:19 AM

Ice-cream and summer
Like the giggle of a child
Is pure happiness.


LOL I know,not the greatest...

Hi Hanevi!


Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fishburger and I realize, Oh my God. I could be eating a slow learner. - Lynda Montgomery
 

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 13 June 2006 at 11:32 AM

Happiness arrives. Pulls up in a repair truck. Air conditioning. _________ THAT one is your you Marelene, sorry about that last word - ack!

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


newleaf ( ) posted Wed, 14 June 2006 at 5:36 AM

Hi Guys & Gals,

I just wanted to let you all know how much I enjoy reading these and the other topics in this forum.

Many Thanks.

Hugs

Pat


Drekinn ( ) posted Wed, 14 June 2006 at 6:07 AM · edited Wed, 14 June 2006 at 6:13 AM

Conditioning done:
Now attuned to heat, your mind;
Body next in line.

--

Marlene: It seems not only the e-bot for this thread didn't find you, but also the one for the 'Alliteration Challenge' (well, I'm hoping that's the reason.), as it's been a whole week without company. How sad!  :ohmy:

Pat, thanks for the encouraging feedback; it makes it all the more enjoyable. 😄

Drekinn
___
"Let words be your palette."
 


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