not bad for a first try the clothing texture needs work -- it looks very 2d. drop her to the floor, neither of her feet are touching it. her pose is a little stiff, work on the neck and arms. Add a better skin texture to her than the default as well, and make sure you set the eyebrow, lip, nipple, etc colors to white and texture those as well -- they look very artificial if you color them with poser colors. otherwise good work, this is a hell of a lot better than my first work.

Ok Thank you:) I knew something wasnt right, but didn't know how to make the clothes look better. And I didn't know about leaving the lips eybrows etc to white and adding texture. So thank you so much, now off to try again!

ermmm.. some of the joints seem a bit off... you might take a few moments and walk through the bend, twist settings... for example.. an elbow doesn't bend that way backwards..(left arm) along with broke's suggestions.. otherwise a very good beginning 8 ) ye have a lot of potential there...

Thanks Wizzard I see what you mean,does look odd, It is so hard to see these things yourself, thats why I finally got brave and posted here!

I'm not sure how you textured her body suit. It looks almost like you superimposed a flat pattern over the suit. Instead, put the cloth pattern on the texture map so the design will conform around the shape of the body. Also, if she's dancing, she needs to look like she's having more fun. Give her a smile, open her mouth like she's singing along with the music, do something with her face. She looks too serious for someone apprently having a good time. There's more than just a body pose involved. The face is also affected by the mood a person is in. Consider the entire figure, not just the position of the arms and legs. Melanie

Same opinion than br0ken the texture is to flat. Check your ambient color and try to set it to black! The problem is that youre clothes doesn't have shadows. Enough bad comments I like the texture of your hairs!