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Subject: New piece - too vague I think.

RodsArt opened this issue on Feb 07, 2010 · 10 posts
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RodsArt ( ) posted Sun, 07 February 2010 at 5:12 PM · edited Mon, 25 November 2024 at 5:58 PM

http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=2015313

Been a while since I worked in Bryce, Model of the hypo made in Bryce,....and the Cigarrette inside it. Guess the Cig doesn't show up very well.

Got hyped on modeling in Bryce though. Will be doing more.

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Rosemaryr ( ) posted Sun, 07 February 2010 at 9:16 PM

Try shortening the cig a bit along it's long axis, so the tobacco flakes can be seen at the end, and maybe do a bit of thin smoke trickling out of the hypo's needle...

(Takes another look...)

Maybe fake up a mock cig companies' logo to put on the filter end.

Just a few suggestions. 

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erosiaart ( ) posted Sun, 07 February 2010 at 9:47 PM

agree with the labelling bit.. a fake one..

pakled ( ) posted Sun, 07 February 2010 at 10:30 PM

increase the transparency? just a thought.

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bikermouse ( ) posted Sun, 07 February 2010 at 11:33 PM

naw, i think you got it right. being so blatant that the lcd can get it isn't what you wanna do. A little vague is what art is about - not that I'd know but yeah!! 

peedy ( ) posted Mon, 08 February 2010 at 12:17 AM

I think it's good as it is now, too.

Corrie

Quest ( ) posted Mon, 08 February 2010 at 1:39 AM · edited Mon, 08 February 2010 at 1:47 AM

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I like the whole concept and the render itself is really great but to be truthful when I first looked at it I didn't realize it was a cigarette until I read it here from you and then it was a eureka moment for me…I’m sometimes slow that way  ;-). So I would agree that some form of identity would enhance the experience for the undiscerning viewer. Perhaps simply adding the typical filter flecks which are commonly seen on cigarette filters to your texture would do the trick. The smoke meandering from the hypo isn't  a bad idea as well.

airflamesred ( ) posted Mon, 08 February 2010 at 5:48 AM

I thought the semi-liquid state of the cigarette worked well my only crit would be the plunger bit should be out

RodsArt ( ) posted Mon, 08 February 2010 at 3:54 PM

Thanks all

@**airflamesred :***the plunger bit should be out

LOL, I spent all the time getting the model to look just right, and the obvious slipped right by me.

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Incarnadine ( ) posted Tue, 09 February 2010 at 11:05 AM

excellent idea Rod.

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