Working on a model for Anastasia

EClark1894 ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 10:48 AM · edited Sat, 02 November 2024 at 12:19 PM

Attached Link: http://www.4shared.com/zip/IRe1v0OE/Mans_Shirt.html

I need some feedback. I modeled this "Man's shirt" for Anastasia and was wondering what you guys think I could do to improve it.

The shirt is Dynamic, and the file is basically includes this:

Man's Shirt.mtl

Man's Shirt.obj

EClark1894 ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 10:50 AM

Just as an aside, since the shirt is Dynamic, Miki4 can wear it as well. I'm also thinking of doing a version for Tyler since it's probably his shirt anyway.![](http://www.renderosity.com/mod/forumpro/art/emoticons/biggrin.gif)

basicwiz ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 10:51 AM

Looks very good. Can't tell from the render, but looks like it could use a little more cloth texture. Are there closed and fully opened versions as well? If so, I could see people getting a LOT of milage out of it!

EClark1894 ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 10:54 AM

Quote - Looks very good. Can't tell from the render, but looks like it could use a little more cloth texture. Are there closed and fully opened versions as well? If so, I could see people getting a LOT of milage out of it!

Not yet, but I did think about it. Probably wouldn't take much to do it.

Also it's a basic obj. not really any textures to go with it yet since I suck at that part of it.

LaurieA ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 11:01 AM · edited Tue, 23 October 2012 at 11:02 AM

Looks like it could also use at least one subdivision? It looks a bit pointy and sharp in places, but good :). However that's something I could do myself if I wanted to. LOL

Laurie

basicwiz ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 11:02 AM

I have a fairly decent cloth procedural somewhere. Will try to find it and send it to you if you want it.

EClark1894 ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 11:04 AM

Quote - I have a fairly decent cloth procedural somewhere. Will try to find it and send it to you if you want it.

Yes, please!

Laurie,

More subdivision, of course! I exported it at the level I stopped at to test it out so I didn't subdivide any further.

LaurieA ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 11:50 AM

Eh, no biggie. I've done the same myself ;).

Good job! I like it! :)

Laurie

Rose2000 ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 12:27 PM

Quote - Looks like it could also use at least one subdivision? It looks a bit pointy and sharp in places, but good :). However that's something I could do myself if I wanted to. LOL

Laurie

Those can easily be fixed with the morph tool smooth brush....Just use it after you run the sim, works like a charm...

cedarwolf ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 12:29 PM

looks good, when can we get one?

vilters ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 12:35 PM · edited Tue, 23 October 2012 at 12:37 PM

I'd like to test your skirt, but one has te register, create an acount, lots of trash trying to download.

The collar could use some more definition.
Did you try with smoothing? I set smoothing crease angle on 180 on almost everything now.

Sorry mate.

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LaurieA ( ) posted Tue, 23 October 2012 at 3:19 PM

Quote - > Quote - Looks like it could also use at least one subdivision? It looks a bit pointy and sharp in places, but good :). However that's something I could do myself if I wanted to. LOL

Laurie

Those can easily be fixed with the morph tool smooth brush....Just use it after you run the sim, works like a charm...

Yeah, but if there's not enough polys to begin with, there's not much to smooth ;). Something I can take care of myself anyway ;)

nobodyinparticular ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 12:38 AM

Looks like it will be very good when finished. I"d be interested when it's ready.

EClark1894 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 9:23 AM · edited Thu, 25 October 2012 at 9:23 AM

Okay, so here's an updated version of the shirt. I went up one more subdivision.

EClark1894 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 9:25 AM

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I also made two other versions of the shirt. One fully open...

EClark1894 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 9:25 AM

And one fully closed.

EClark1894 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 9:30 AM

Attached Link: http://www.4shared.com/zip/OtGQ5C5M/Mans_Shirt_2.html

I've also updated the download file and include all three versions.

paganeagle2001 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 9:52 AM

A quick note before I test.

Please, please, don't put the runtime inside of another folder as it does not install correctly.

Go inside of the folder you currently have the runtime in, so you can see the runtime folder and zip from there.

Then it will install correctly.

If you install your file it installs as:-

PoserRuntimeMan' ShirtRuntimeProp etc. This will not work.

In fact there should be a Libraries folder in there as well as a folde called Props, not Prop.

It should be:-

RuntimeLibrariesPropsDynamic Clothing

All the best.

LROG

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EClark1894 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 9:58 AM

Quote - A quick note before I test.

Please, please, don't put the runtime inside of another folder as it does not install correctly.

Go inside of the folder you currently have the runtime in, so you can see the runtime folder and zip from there.

Then it will install correctly.

If you install your file it installs as:-

PoserRuntimeMan' ShirtRuntimeProp etc. This will not work.

In fact there should be a Libraries folder in there as well as a folde called Props, not Prop.

It should be:-

RuntimeLibrariesPropsDynamic Clothing

All the best.

LROG

All right Richard. It's good info to have and I'll try to remember it in the future.

Some one made a sample distribution file once, but I can't find it anymore. I had it, but lost it on my machine.

paganeagle2001 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 10:03 AM

Link to my own zipfile:-

http://www.sharecg.com/v/44791/View/11/Poser/Poser---DAZ-Studio-Easy-Zip

All the best.

LROG

Who honors those we love for the very life we live?, Who sends monsters to kill us?, and at the same time sings that we will never die., Who teaches us whats real?, and how to laugh at lies?, Who decides why we live and what we'll die to defend?, Who chains us?, and Who holds the key that can set us free... It's You!, You have all the weapons you need., Now Fight!

paganeagle2001 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 10:08 AM

Also spotted you have not set it up as a Poser Prop file.

Load up your shirt into Poser.

Then save it to a folder in your Props section:-

Dynamic Clothing

Once you do that, Poser will create a prop file for you.

At the moment, you just have the obj and the mtl file in there.

All the best.

LROG

Who honors those we love for the very life we live?, Who sends monsters to kill us?, and at the same time sings that we will never die., Who teaches us whats real?, and how to laugh at lies?, Who decides why we live and what we'll die to defend?, Who chains us?, and Who holds the key that can set us free... It's You!, You have all the weapons you need., Now Fight!

EClark1894 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 10:21 AM · edited Thu, 25 October 2012 at 10:23 AM

> Quote - Also spotted you have not set it up as a Poser Prop file. > > Load up your shirt into Poser. > > Then save it to a folder in your Props section:- > > Dynamic Clothing > > Once you do that, Poser will create a prop file for you. > > At the moment, you just have the obj and the mtl file in there. > > All the best. > > LROG

Well, yeah. I stated that in the first post. But I get your point.

paganeagle2001 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 10:26 AM

Check your pm, I have a little file for you.

All the best.

LROG

Who honors those we love for the very life we live?, Who sends monsters to kill us?, and at the same time sings that we will never die., Who teaches us whats real?, and how to laugh at lies?, Who decides why we live and what we'll die to defend?, Who chains us?, and Who holds the key that can set us free... It's You!, You have all the weapons you need., Now Fight!

paganeagle2001 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 10:56 AM

Version 3 of the shirt on Miki 4.

All the best.

LROG

Who honors those we love for the very life we live?, Who sends monsters to kill us?, and at the same time sings that we will never die., Who teaches us whats real?, and how to laugh at lies?, Who decides why we live and what we'll die to defend?, Who chains us?, and Who holds the key that can set us free... It's You!, You have all the weapons you need., Now Fight!

paganeagle2001 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 11:22 AM

Also needs a UV map.

I used UVMapper to add one for my tester models.

All the best.

LROG

Who honors those we love for the very life we live?, Who sends monsters to kill us?, and at the same time sings that we will never die., Who teaches us whats real?, and how to laugh at lies?, Who decides why we live and what we'll die to defend?, Who chains us?, and Who holds the key that can set us free... It's You!, You have all the weapons you need., Now Fight!

LaurieA ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 11:45 AM

Very cute :)

Laurie

paganeagle2001 ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 11:51 AM

Just tried with my UV map and it's all over the place.

You need to make a UV map for the lowest mesh.

Save the mesh.

Then you can use that mesh to subdiv as the UV will still be applied.

All the best.

LROG

Who honors those we love for the very life we live?, Who sends monsters to kill us?, and at the same time sings that we will never die., Who teaches us whats real?, and how to laugh at lies?, Who decides why we live and what we'll die to defend?, Who chains us?, and Who holds the key that can set us free... It's You!, You have all the weapons you need., Now Fight!

Janl ( ) posted Thu, 25 October 2012 at 1:14 PM

Quote - I've also updated the download file and include all three versions.

It looks very good. Well done!

Unfortunately I don't have a 4Shared account. :sad: Would it be possible to upload to ShareCG or here in the Freebies section?

bobbesch ( ) posted Fri, 26 October 2012 at 1:59 PM

Quote - Version 3 of the shirt on Miki 4.

All the best.

LROG

A very nice shirt. But the buttons seem to be loose, in a test they went all over the place, as in your picture.

EClark1894 ( ) posted Sat, 27 October 2012 at 11:39 AM

Quote - > Quote - Version 3 of the shirt on Miki 4.

All the best.

LROG

A very nice shirt. But the buttons seem to be loose, in a test they went all over the place, as in your picture.

The buttons need to be constrained to the shirt otherwise they will probably just fall off.

And tht's in the Read Me I included.

bobbesch ( ) posted Sat, 27 October 2012 at 3:50 PM

Quote - > Quote - > Quote - Version 3 of the shirt on Miki 4.

All the best.

LROG

A very nice shirt. But the buttons seem to be loose, in a test they went all over the place, as in your picture.

The buttons need to be constrained to the shirt otherwise they will probably just fall off.

And tht's in the Read Me I included.

Thank you for your response, time to read the Read Me I guess.

EClark1894 ( ) posted Mon, 05 November 2012 at 9:48 AM

Okay, so I UV Mapped the shirt as requested. Finally figured out how to use UVMapper, so win-win there.

Also found out that since the shirt is supposed to be a man's shirt anyway, it shold fit loosely around Anastasia. I also tried out the shirt on other models.

I put a belt on it and made it into a shirt dress....