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Subject: Need suggestions on this project

ladydrakana opened this issue on Jul 13, 2017 · 9 posts

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ladydrakana ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2017 at 2:06 PM · edited Tue, 26 November 2024 at 9:06 AM

Here is what I have so far. Making this for my boyfriend who used to work for the air-force and was into rockets as a hobby. His birthday is coming up very soon. Any suggestions on changes or things to add?

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ladydrakana ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2017 at 2:08 PM

Forgot to mention. There has not been any post work yet. Didn't want to go there until it was done or almost done.

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Lobo3433 ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2017 at 3:49 PM

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I like it as is mainly because you are taking the effort to make something for him on his birthday and that thought and effort makes it a special present as is unless you want to add his name to the Birthday banner

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RobynsVeil ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2017 at 4:36 PM

I'm going to assume the "stars" are created with particles: I'd set the clumping a bit (like to more random, not so evenly spaced), since they're meant to represent galaxies and such. Otherwise, nice work!

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ladydrakana ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2017 at 7:03 PM

Lobo3433 - thought about putting his last name on the side of the rocket. But thought it might be to much. Still might do it anyways. RobynsVeil - Stars were created with procedural. No Particles involved. But get what you mean. Still figuring it out.

Thank you both for your comments

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LuxXeon ( ) posted Thu, 13 July 2017 at 10:10 PM

Very thoughtful project. Yes, I'd incorporate his name somewhere to make it more personalized. The stars are procedural? Interesting,

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TheBryster ( ) posted Fri, 14 July 2017 at 10:59 AM

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I think the rocket needs to be better illuminated and perhaps have a longer exhaust plume......just my 2pence worth.

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ladydrakana ( ) posted Fri, 14 July 2017 at 11:42 AM

OK, Added his name. And did a little post-work as well.

TheBryster - I did make the exhaust longer. Thank you for the suggestion.

The rocket is a model I made years ago in Wings3D. For a report that he made for the Air-force. There is very little detail. Was concerned that lighting it up to much more would show the flaws more that improve the image.

Anyways, is this any better?

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