Forum Coordinators: RedPhantom
Poser - OFFICIAL F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2024 Nov 11 2:56 am)
This is a BEAUTIFUL image. The only thing that looks awry to me is the shadows...notice how her arm is casting a shadow on the (lilly?), but her stretched out leg is not. The leg looks flat, where the arm looks three-dimensional. That's the only thing wrong that I can see, and it doesn't detract from this at all.
Looks good. I think such a spot inside a bunch of leaves would be darker withperhaps some strong leaf shadows accross her body. The light seems pointed at her face from the camera and might be better above with a tiiny spot on her face. Some soft yelow and pale grean lights might be nice. Her arm looks like it is resting on the branch but the shadow on the cloth suggests it is floating. Try making the color of the hair and clothes a bit darker. just some ideas.
-Anton, creator of
ApolloMaximus: 32,000+ downloads
since 3-13-07
"Conviction without truth is denial; Denial in the
face of truth is concealment."
I would add a touch of luster to the skin texture. She seems flat compared to her environment. You could either add a low strenght reflection map, or if you have Photo shop, COPY the texture, add a layer and fill it with a soft clear yellow. Erase from eyewhites, teeth,& lashes. Change opacity to around 10%, Save as a psd first (incase you want to make more adjustments) then as a high quality jpeg. This effect can breathe life into the skin when all surfaces around are luminous. BTW, Laini is a great texture.
Depth of field. Although the distant background is appropriately blurred out, both the leaves in front and behind the figure are of equal sharpness. The most foreground leaves--those directly in front of the lens--should be softer (slightly blurred).
Also, her wings are a bit odd. Hard to tell what they were until I read your post.
This site uses cookies to deliver the best experience. Our own cookies make user accounts and other features possible. Third-party cookies are used to display relevant ads and to analyze how Renderosity is used. By using our site, you acknowledge that you have read and understood our Terms of Service, including our Cookie Policy and our Privacy Policy.