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Subject: Some comments please. I would like to improve this.

ddaydreams opened this issue on Aug 14, 2005 · 13 posts
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ddaydreams ( ) posted Sun, 14 August 2005 at 8:32 PM · edited Thu, 07 November 2024 at 5:02 PM

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=1024321&Start=1&Artist=ddaydreams&ByArtist=Yes

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Hi I just posted an bryce image in my gallery. I modeled it and rendered it in bryce. I would like to improve this. And hear what you have to say about it. The good, the bad,the ugly.:) The big version is in my gallery. Thanks for any comment help or advise.

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zollster ( ) posted Sun, 14 August 2005 at 8:45 PM

imho the world in the background would look better off to 1 side rather than dead centre. other than that its great

Swade ( ) posted Sun, 14 August 2005 at 9:12 PM

I agree with zollster.... Might I also suggest some exhaust from each of those craft?

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pakled ( ) posted Sun, 14 August 2005 at 10:28 PM

Great detail and work with the atmosphere..I should do so good..;)

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Ariela ( ) posted Sun, 14 August 2005 at 10:29 PM

I agree with all of the above comments. It is a great start, though! :-)

ddaydreams ( ) posted Sun, 14 August 2005 at 11:19 PM · edited Sun, 14 August 2005 at 11:20 PM

Thanks all for your imput so far.
I tried the background world to one side then the other. Then I tried the center, normally I would not center something like that but it seemed to work. I probably should have stuck with my first choice.
I considered putting flames or glowy stuff at the rear of the engines. Yeah I like the exaust idea. I also tried the background planet being more cresent shaped but could not get it to look right. I may do a repost with the improvments.Any more help would be good.

Message edited on: 08/14/2005 23:20

Frank Hawkins/Owner/DigitalDaydreams

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ddaydreams ( ) posted Mon, 15 August 2005 at 12:00 AM · edited Mon, 15 August 2005 at 12:01 AM

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=1024390&Start=1&Artist=ddaydreams&ByArtist=Yes

Hi The link to my image has changed. Here is the new link Thanks

Message edited on: 08/15/2005 00:01

Frank Hawkins/Owner/DigitalDaydreams

Frank_Hawkins_Design

Frank Lee Hawkins Eastern Sierra Gallery Store

 

My U.S.A eBay Graphics Software Store~~ My International eBay Graphics Software Store

 

Sans2012 ( ) posted Mon, 15 August 2005 at 12:10 AM

Looks cool! Have you tried cropping the image, cutting some of the left side off? This might be something you can try;) Keep up the good work:)

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tantarus ( ) posted Mon, 15 August 2005 at 2:02 AM

cool image :)
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MoonGoat ( ) posted Mon, 15 August 2005 at 12:20 PM

Exhaust trails from the engines? I would also crop the sides and the bottom in a bit.

ddaydreams ( ) posted Tue, 16 August 2005 at 10:53 AM

Thanks all I'm tring some of your suggestions. I sent some time adding exuast and engine flame and working on many other changes, composition. Got long way to go. this could take a while. Fun stuff:)

Frank Hawkins/Owner/DigitalDaydreams

Frank_Hawkins_Design

Frank Lee Hawkins Eastern Sierra Gallery Store

 

My U.S.A eBay Graphics Software Store~~ My International eBay Graphics Software Store

 

ddaydreams ( ) posted Tue, 16 August 2005 at 10:54 AM

I will repost when I'v made some signifigant changes.

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Frank_Hawkins_Design

Frank Lee Hawkins Eastern Sierra Gallery Store

 

My U.S.A eBay Graphics Software Store~~ My International eBay Graphics Software Store

 

skiwillgee ( ) posted Tue, 16 August 2005 at 1:21 PM

Sorry for late comment. Maybe you already fixed things more. I agree with above suggestions especially exhaust and trails ( since your engines have intakes it is assumed they burning something ) Also, from some things I've read concerning photography and art in general, visual lines that draw you attention to the desired subject. Example, your clouds have a natural diagonal slant. Use that. Move the planet and foreground ships slightly left or crop so viewer's eyes move to subject. Oh well, enough said from this old guy. It is your picture after all.

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