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Bryce F.A.Q (Last Updated: 2025 Jan 04 3:16 am)
You might wanna consider your speeling of the word 'PANAMAS'. If this is supposed to be 'posessive'(belonging to) it should be PANAMA'S FINEST Just a thought....
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Agree w TheBryster re: "Panama's". My only other crit would be that I find the transparency on the face is possibly a bit too strong. I keep looking at that bit (the human eye is strongly drawn to faces), and trying to decide just what, exactly, is under the bits hidden by the background. Reducing the transparancy might bring the face more into focus...:-) But, of course, it's up to you.. Cheers, Diolma
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