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Subject: Critical Comments Wanted


Denger ( ) posted Sat, 11 November 2006 at 12:52 AM · edited Wed, 25 December 2024 at 10:56 AM

I'm stymied on the postwork phase for this recent photograph.  Two of the above images have been adjusted and one is the original image, no adjustments (except resizing).  Your critical remarks and suggestions will be gratefully accepted, so please be as blunt as necessary!

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FuzzyShadows ( ) posted Sat, 11 November 2006 at 1:31 AM

Well the clouds are the strong point, almost abstract. That's what I would go with. I would crop the left side so ALL the shingles were gone. Then rotate it either 90 or 180 degrees... but that's just a personal taste. Those clouds are awesome.


babuci ( ) posted Sat, 11 November 2006 at 2:23 AM

well Carl!...F.S got a point about crop the roof top part. Personaly I would go with "C" I like a shiluett effect on a trees, but perhaps I would adjust a cloud color a bit darker ( more blue). Conbine B' cloud color and contrast with C' trees.

seeya  Tunde


Dianthus ( ) posted Sat, 11 November 2006 at 3:50 AM

Well i love the clouds and i like B. But would clone out the roof of the  house.
Chris


girsempa ( ) posted Sat, 11 November 2006 at 3:54 AM

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I agree with cropping out the roof part. I think I would probably try to achieve something like this: colorize the image to bring a more uniform color tone to the whole image; up the contrast a little to bring out the cloud structure and to make the trees more silhouetted; slightly darken the top gradually. I applied the same on the whole image, and now there's virtually no difference between the three...


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Denger ( ) posted Sat, 11 November 2006 at 4:35 PM

**In some cases, you have confirmed my intentions; in other respects, some of the suggestions seem counter-intuitive to me.  This project needed fresh perspectives, and it will benefit from them.  Thank you so much for your insights! **

                                                     Concepts are the playthings of an active intellect.

 


busi2ness ( ) posted Sun, 12 November 2006 at 4:58 AM

A bit late, but for what it's worth: B for the more emphasized clouds plus some of the other suggestions.

Good luck, show us in time what you have come up with Carl.

Piet Vermeulen, South Africa


DJB ( ) posted Mon, 13 November 2006 at 12:31 AM

I  think clouds and sky is proper in B....and then if you can do that colour and contrast for C it would be good. Like Tunde. I enjoy the silouhettes of trees.

"The happiness of a man in this life does not consist in the absence but in the mastery of his passions."



danob ( ) posted Mon, 13 November 2006 at 2:54 AM

Personally I think you missed an opportunity to make the most of the sky and to find an alternative POV where perhaps just one tree, and use of a polarising filter

Danny O'Byrne  http://www.digitalartzone.co.uk/

"All the technique in the world doesn't compensate for the inability to notice" Eliott Erwitt


TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 13 November 2006 at 4:26 PM

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I have to agree with Danny here that I think you missed an opportunity to get some alternate POVs to capture those neat clouds.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 13 November 2006 at 4:27 PM

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They don't come along too often so fill up that memory card with as many angles and POVs as you can.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


TwoPynts ( ) posted Mon, 13 November 2006 at 4:29 PM

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Of course, you are just showing us one pic, perhaps you had some others that you are not sharing here. I do think that the strong point of your photo in addition to the dramatic clouds is the interaction of the bare branches with it. The roof is just a distraction.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Dianthus ( ) posted Mon, 13 November 2006 at 10:44 PM

Hi Carl,
Just interested to see what you come up with regarding these ideas.
Chris


Denger ( ) posted Tue, 14 November 2006 at 9:43 AM

**@danob & TwoPynts:  I snapped a bunch o' shots!  This one had the most sky/cloud color contrast.  BTW, "C" is the original image as downloaded from the camera; "B" is closest color-wise to what I remember the true sky color to have been.  I am experimenting with curves and levels.  It is interesting to see all y'all's thoughts on the subject... obviously, that roof has got to go! **

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They don't come along too often so fill up that memory card with as many angles and POVs as you can.

                                                     Concepts are the playthings of an active intellect.

 


TwoPynts ( ) posted Tue, 14 November 2006 at 12:06 PM

Okay Carl, gotcha. Well as far as working with what you've got here, the others pretty much had it covered, so I didn't add to that. :)

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


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