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Something Secret

Poser Story/Sequential posted on Sep 27, 2005
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Kaylee has a happy little secret. Sometimes, after peeking through her daddy's bedroom door to make sure he's asleep, she sneaks down the hall to the kitchen to make herself a late-night treat. It's a little before ten-thirty. She flicks on the kitchen light and takes the biggest tumbler she can find from the cupboard next to the sink. She sets it on the bench top and fetches a bottle of milk from the fridge. She lifts the big heavy bottle with both hands and tips it gently over the tumbler, careful not to spill any drops onto the bench or the kitchen floor. Daddy would get angry if she made a mess. With the tumbler about two inches from full, she pops the milk back into the fridge and opens the pantry door. There it is! The Cottees Thick & Rich Chocolate Sauce. Yum! She licks her lips and fills the tumbler, watching with growing excitement as the thick brown syrup curls into the milk and forms a heavy sludge at the bottom. Again, careful not to spill a single drop (daddy would get so angry), she puts the cap back on the bottle and returns it to the pantry. She takes one of the long tea spoons from the cutlery drawer (sliding the drawer as gently as she can so as not to make a sound) and stirs the chocolate sauce into the milk, careful not to let the spoon clink against the sides of the glass. She can almost taste the rich creamy chocolate already, sliding down her throat and into her belly. Mmmmm! She grins with excitement. Daddy's bedroom door opens silently behind her. He steps out into the hall, squinting at the light coming down from the kitchen. He stretches, having fallen asleep at an uncomfortable angle. He cracks his neck, but doesn't find much relief. The pain has put him in a bad mood. He watches his daughter for a little while, then stalks down the hallway toward her. He fumbles in his pockets for his cigarette lighter. He leans against the kitchen door behind Kaylee and lights a cigarette. The familiar sound of the Bicco lighter has an immediate effect on the young girl. She freezes, the tumbler barely inches from her lips. For a moment she hopes it was just her mind playing tricks on her, or that it was just the sound of the fridge turning on, or a noisy cockroach disturbed by her activity in the pantry. But then her daddy's shadow falls over her. He sniffs, grinning at the back of his daughter's head as she stands rooted on the spot, frozen with fear. He cracks his knuckles. Kaylee has a terrible secret. Credits: Hair by Koz Clothing from DAZ Set by me

Comments (14)


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systemx

6:10AM | Tue, 27 September 2005

Excellent render and beautifull fabric texture.

Merlin2000

6:50AM | Tue, 27 September 2005

Excellent and fantastic Image and Colors !!! Excellent and Vote!!!

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linkdink

7:08AM | Tue, 27 September 2005

Great pic, cute little girl, love the shadows and lights.

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ericfarris

7:29AM | Tue, 27 September 2005

So happy you post again Darren, you stories are also excellent and mysterious!!!! Hope Kaylee's dad don't hurt her. I can't wait the next!!!! - For your image, so excellent, beautiful lightning and awesome expression - BIG BRAVO my friend!!!!! EXCELLENT!!!!

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papachile

8:20AM | Tue, 27 September 2005

Oh God. I could feel the excitement in her with your writing. ANd I could feel the fear too. My God, it was chilling, and terrible. I do hope that there is a happy ending. I really do. Your render is incredible!! Awesome work!

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Rynn

8:43AM | Tue, 27 September 2005

gulps terrifying story and a wonderful render!

svdl

12:34PM | Tue, 27 September 2005

Magnificent render, the subtle expression on that adorable little girl is marvelous. And AWESOME writing. It starts out so innocent, and it gets so dark and threatening, brilliant! Let's hope Ambin can make it in time...

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DennisReed

12:49PM | Tue, 27 September 2005

Wonderful chapter and new character intro into your Fabulous Vixen II saga! I agree with svdl's analysis, each paragraph steps deeper into ?????? Can't wait for the next installment! :) Bravo!

Othosmops

4:58PM | Tue, 27 September 2005

These looking-glass-insight renders are so intense - there is not much action in the image, but I am totally struck after reading your episodes. Now I really want to know if svdl is right with his prognosis. Hope the next installment comes soon. ;^)

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Mea

9:05PM | Tue, 27 September 2005

Chilling piece of writing. Excellent job.

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sLexie

2:43AM | Thu, 29 September 2005

Beautiful!!

theMIB

7:42AM | Sun, 02 October 2005

very good work!

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Axeye

9:07PM | Tue, 11 October 2005

How very frightening! With all my heart I hope this is not about you! But for any child who faces such a terrible life, my heart is broken! Children are the greatest gift in life, and anyone who would harm these treasures deserves the worst fate life could bring! Beautiful image and a powerful message! Beyond excellent work!

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A_

5:18AM | Sun, 21 May 2006

this is so very well written! you can really feel everything she's going through. and the image is great too.


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