Lost treasures by SusiQ
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Description
The music blaring
Contrast to depression
deep inside, staring
into space.
A phrase catching
the attention briefly
Barely scratching
the death
Hopeless, bored apathy
A deep relaxing sigh
Muscles let go
of life
A glimpse of future
turns to hate
Blue/green eyes
now slate
Oh, would be that,
one word of hope,
of friendship, of love
be mine.
I'm alone
Suffering silently
No one to call
To talk of troubles
To cling and hold onto
To love without regret or fears
Into space, the death of life, now slate, be mine.
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Would you believe it! I found a folder that contained a lot of my old work. This is a poem I did in 1985 while still at school.
The WIP story is busy being written but I have to finish, untangle and rewrite a few sections. Will be posted soon.
Hugs to all!
Comments (5)
PeeWee05
WOW! I was 2 years old!!! Lovely work for back then, you had the seed!
STEVIEUKWONDER
Very fine words Susan. You obviously have a natural ability to express yourself so profoundly. Excellent! Steve :o) V!
busi2ness
Very dramatic! This is good poetry from a mature sensitive mind where age was not a prerequisite.
TallPockets
"Would you believe it! I found a folder that contained a lot of my old work. This is a poem I did in 1985 while still at school." -- From a tiny acorn, the mighty oak grows - WINK. SO good!!
Margana
Very profound and stirring words.Excellent.