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Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Apr 24, 2006
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The music blaring Contrast to depression deep inside, staring into space. A phrase catching the attention briefly Barely scratching the death Hopeless, bored apathy A deep relaxing sigh Muscles let go of life A glimpse of future turns to hate Blue/green eyes now slate Oh, would be that, one word of hope, of friendship, of love be mine. I'm alone Suffering silently No one to call To talk of troubles To cling and hold onto To love without regret or fears Into space, the death of life, now slate, be mine. ****************************************** Would you believe it! I found a folder that contained a lot of my old work. This is a poem I did in 1985 while still at school. The WIP story is busy being written but I have to finish, untangle and rewrite a few sections. Will be posted soon. Hugs to all!

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PeeWee05

8:47AM | Mon, 24 April 2006

WOW! I was 2 years old!!! Lovely work for back then, you had the seed!

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STEVIEUKWONDER

8:48AM | Mon, 24 April 2006

Very fine words Susan. You obviously have a natural ability to express yourself so profoundly. Excellent! Steve :o) V!

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busi2ness

9:10AM | Mon, 24 April 2006

Very dramatic! This is good poetry from a mature sensitive mind where age was not a prerequisite.

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TallPockets

10:54AM | Mon, 24 April 2006

"Would you believe it! I found a folder that contained a lot of my old work. This is a poem I did in 1985 while still at school." -- From a tiny acorn, the mighty oak grows - WINK. SO good!!

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Margana

5:35PM | Thu, 27 April 2006

Very profound and stirring words.Excellent.


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