Secret Lives Part V by SusiQ
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The high heels made a rapid click as she paced up and down the street looking for the alley her sister had been spotted in a few days prior.
The crinkled photo she clenched in her hand could have been of herself. She knew something had happened to her twin. Felt the disconnection, the piece of herself sliced away. Her emotions were intense, the tears very close to the surface as she looked for signs of her sister.
She hated her sister
Comments (6)
drace68
Description of the man's surrounds : excellent. The cliffhanger: well plotted. But this paragraph is jumbled: Whatdaya want, ..." More, please. -- Dick
vaggabondd
Sue its not nice to leave me hanging like this. lol. nice job
Margana
I like the tension and the uneasy atmosphere you are creating.Very well done.
PeeWee05
no no soapy at all but a very good novel!!!
TallPockets
Wonderful work! Methinks we should call this series, "Tuesdays with SusiQ?". WINK. T.P.
DennisReed
Superb the way you picked this up again! :) I'm hooked, keep it coming!