Secret Lives Part V by SusiQ

Writers • Work In Progress • posted on Apr 26, 2006

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Description

The high heels made a rapid click as she paced up and down the street looking for the alley her sister had been spotted in a few days prior. The crinkled photo she clenched in her hand could have been of herself. She knew something had happened to her twin. Felt the disconnection, the piece of herself sliced away. Her emotions were intense, the tears very close to the surface as she looked for signs of her sister. She hated her sister

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drace68

7:05AM | Wed, 26 April 2006

Description of the man's surrounds : excellent. The cliffhanger: well plotted. But this paragraph is jumbled: Whatdaya want, ..." More, please. -- Dick

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