Lust & desire by SusiQ
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Hi all.
Once again I apologise for my lack of comments on everyone's work. I shoved in a few minutes of writing between my financials etc and found these words in my soul.
Don't ask me where they come from - I have no idea.....
Hugs to you all and thanks for stopping by.
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**Lust and desire**
Tingles,
Taunts
Teases my senses
A thought,
a smile,
Slides under my fences
Flutters,
fleeting,
Attraction commences
Raw,
untamed,
Without false pretenses
Pain
aching
Unrequited expenses
Comments (5)
PeeWee05
I think it's hot - seems you've got something on your mind...
DennisReed
Snap snap snap! :) That's my old beatnik applause! Bravo!
busi2ness
Wonderful use of very few words to paint a picture.
NothingNess
Sublime! Your words most definitely capture the essence of lust and desire.
meico
Excellent example of rhythmic progression in poetry - and in an affair. I do love bittersweet! Mike