Achille's Heel by locomouse
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Description
There floats a basket
Black as tar
The story's known
From near and far
Along the current
Silent it flows
Evil within it
Everyone knows
I heard a tale
Of good gone bad
The basket harbors
The Iliad
A body witheld
A murderer free
To scare the likes
Of you and me
Reach for it
And if you dare
Lay its contents
Dry and bare
Bones will rattle
Bats will scream
Forever you'll hear it
In your dreams
Look in the mirror
Your eyes are hollow
Reflections of death
Will surely follow
Some believe
Some still ponder
But if I were you
I wouldn't wonder
Leave it be
And walk away
You'll live to see
Another day
;)
Image created in Ultra Fractal... verse in.. ummm... Notepad... :)
Thanks so much for your kind feedback on my earlier uploads... and thank you for zeroing in on this one. It's weird, I know... but it's also almost Halloween... ;)
Thanks for putting up with me and my antics...
Hugs!
Helen :)
Comments (37)
H_Dog
OK, LM...looks like those classes are paying off bigtime! This shows some new twists and turns, and magic tricks we haven't seen before. It's a beauty :) Your words are equally fun and creative. Cool poetry AND a cool fractal...multitasking at its best ;)
madcatter
I LOVE your antics!!! This image is a wonderful fantasy and your poem is excellent! Very apropos for the season!
Louy
A hallowe'en theme from a distant mystery. Finely lined with embroydery of contrast and shades of blue-green and pink. It's an epic in colour.I won't touch the basket!Beautifully developed from the poem with the intrigue.
SkyeKat
Very beautiful and creative - love the delicacy. Cool poem also!
Pannyhb
Fun and whimsical - and a very classy presentaion! The 'basket" is way cool, as are the RRL?spidery webs!
IreneS
Wow, what an incredible posting! Your fractal is completely gorgeous, and I like your poetry too. This is great.
joefraq
Magnificent!!!
Lenord
It's a Beauty, love the Greens and Turquoise, Splended. Who is this Notepad you speak of? 5+5 Peace
fractalinda
You're a poet! Deliciously Poe-like and really excellent. And the image.. Well, besides being thoroughly enchanting and alluring, it is SUPERB! Brava, dear Helen! :~)
chesscanoe
Somehow I think Halloween must be getting close - fantastic image and complementary poem; which took more 'render' time? :-)
vdallas
How dare you challenge the classics. The calloused heel... the mother's promise/curse.... but you make it so feminine. The greatest warrior carries his mother's naivety to his fate. A wonderful image of mis-directed fates! Achille lives forever!. [Also, the poem is good ... very good.] [Did I spell anything incorrectly?]
mountmous
To say it in classic English: that's totally smashing! I'm impressed by the poem and even more by the image. Top notch!
Xantipa
Wonderful playing colors. Very deliciously. E.
Junglegeorge
I love it :-)
AnnaKirsten
Helen, this is a most impactful image with incredible shapes and wonderful definition! Your little ditty is great too - giggles!
DreamersWish
That is utterly terrific! I just love each beautiful part and the colors are just gorgeous! Well done!
Raven78
Beautiful colors and perfect design! Bravo!
kansas
An incredible fractal!
farmerC
Dit is een Juweeltje. Very Beautiful.
RodolfoCiminelli
Amazing and very creative fractal my friend.....!!!
abmlober
A wonderful work. I like the variety of elements very much.
bpclarke
Superbly done! Elegant and equisite work. Bunny
redbeard
Terrific! I love everything about it!
Lyne
Amazing!!! Never mind the "evil" ....this is beautiful!! :)
Megandoc
Helen, this is gorgeous, both graphic and verse! :)
stefan_vitanov
Most beautiful fractal creation I've seen in the recent months. Magnificent!
Allenox
I liked the poem and image very much. Great job!
LightArtFractals
I agree with all of the above!
avalonfaayre
OH MAH GAWSH! This is so BEAUTIFUL! I am wrapped up and carried off by these awesome colors! I know that doesn't go with the verse you supplied, but I find it soothing and beautiful. Another gorgeous.
miwi
Fantastic work,love it!!!!!!!!!