Faery Ring (please critique) by Uthena
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Description
This is my first attempt at using a backround. I used Throne's Peridot with my own textures. It's an illustration for a poem I wrote.
Comments (6)
Quikp51
Well her shadow does match her pose , she's just floating that's all. But the backdrop does need to be blended into the foreground a little better.
skyking
Also on the mushrooms or any prop that is repeated,change the scale of each.But kind goin it will get better.
paul leatham
There is no intergration, she looks like she's in front of a painted backdrop and her shadow doesn't match her pose. Blurred too.
Archanejill
adorable! but i agree with the others that the backdrop needs to be more blended with her...and the mushrooms look like they could be pushed over at any second. I'm not sure but i think renderosity (if not renderosity, then a site linked to it) has some mushrooms for poser with morphs built in. Grab those, put those in the pic and then put in the backdrop. I think the problem is with the mushrooms. cute tho!
June
Hey, that's good for a first post! Perhaps it needs less blurr and a better integration in the background? Keep going!
Uthena
How do I integrate the backround better guys? This is my first attempt!