The Stowaway (Final) by woodant

Poser • Science Fiction • posted on May 01, 2007

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Okay...so firstly, thank you to all who commented on the first one and are now coming back for more (mad fools!). If you haven't seen the WIP and would like to see the differences please follow this URL: http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=1432006 I *think* that should get you there. So what have I done? - Lightened the general face area to make it the overall focus point of the image. (Thanks Lemur01 for the heads-up on that action!) - Removed the strange hand shadow from the character's left shoulder - Softened up the shadows from clothing and removed the incorrect light from inside the left shorts leg. - Softened the neck, removing some of that "twistiness" that was apparent before. - Fractionally darkened the left eye to compensate for the increased brightness from the general face lighting - Touched up the hair to fix a few unwanted artifacts I haven't been able to change the way the shirt fits, as this appears to be something happening with the shirt geometry when the character had the Genesis body morph injected. I've tried a few things to improve it but they were all poor. Also, the texture artifacts on the right breast are present, even in a "straight-out-the-box" render with this clothing pack. I guess it's a mapping thing... Anyway, I guess if you're still reading you must be bored by now, so...I hope you enjoy. Although I probably won't change it now, I'd be interested to hear if you think my changes have improved the image or made it worse! ;) lol Thanks for looking, Ant. Credits: As before Stonemason: Cargo Bay Genesis for V4 LM Domino Outfit for V4

Comments (31)

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FrankT

6:08PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

definately an improvement. Mind you - the original was pretty good

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averroes

6:09PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

excellent

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Rutra

6:12PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

I think it's better now but I see you havent fixed a thing that I thought would be the easiest: the lack of bumpiness in the blouse. That's the most notorious for me, specially in the lower part the blouse seems almost like plastic. Well, at least for me. Anyway, this is a good image. And, you know, I think this could become a series... where the mistery of what she's looking at would be unveiled, gradually. Or even intensified... I think the character and the BG are good enough to support that.

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flaviok

6:19PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

belissima obra, aplausos

Baka001

6:23PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

whoa, i live the scenery... great image 5+

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Thelby

6:26PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

Beautiful lighting and your Character is Most Gorgeous!!! Super Job, this is Awesome!!!

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dricci

6:27PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

Cool scene!!! ;)

Denys234

6:46PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

Excellent!

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netlion66

7:29PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

Great scene and top image!!

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Greywolf Starkiller

8:37PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

Personally, I like it. I haven't seen the first image, but I really can't see how you can improve this any further. :)

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DanB-Creations

9:09PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

Very nice render. Very beauty face!

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FUNJOKER

10:06PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

E-X-C-E-L-L-E-N-T ;)*****.

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Seliah

10:35PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

Oh, I LIKE this. Love her expression, this is an absolutely wonderful and imaginative point of view on the camera angle, too. Nice work!

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cmcc

11:29PM | Tue, 01 May 2007

terrific picture. i really love it.

PoserSecrets

2:51AM | Wed, 02 May 2007

Very cool scene and great expression! Great lighting and shadows! *****

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Kartika

3:00AM | Wed, 02 May 2007

Excellent scene and pose!

altec101

3:21AM | Wed, 02 May 2007

Stunningly beautiful!! Excellent artwork...

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TheAnimaGemini

4:36AM | Wed, 02 May 2007

I really like this one. Great work.Love the camera angle and your lights. Excellent work.

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JOELGLAINE

5:26AM | Wed, 02 May 2007

Much improved. You did good! Great scene!

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Tracesl

5:40AM | Wed, 02 May 2007

Excellent

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Sivana

7:36AM | Wed, 02 May 2007

It really looks much better with the new lighting now. Very good work!!

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drifterlee

12:35AM | Thu, 03 May 2007

Gorgeous! I love the POV!

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KarenJ

4:45AM | Thu, 03 May 2007

Very nice. Amazing how a few changes can make such an improvement, eh? The blurred background works really well. Great lighting too.

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Tiari

11:08AM | Thu, 03 May 2007

Much better, that "inner short light" well, i've missed lighting like that myself and usually need someone to point it out.

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Anniebel

6:43PM | Sat, 05 May 2007

Nice improvement, well done.

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pjz99

6:28AM | Sun, 06 May 2007

Damn proxy server tried to eat me comment! I don't have any complaints, especially nice bit of yellow backlight the viewer expects to see coming from the dome light in the background. If you had not tried a magnet to adjust the fit of the shirt, you might do that. The texture flaw you could probably correct in postwork with clone and/or liquefy (assuming you use Photoshop)

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DapperMan

5:07PM | Mon, 07 May 2007

As noted, great POV and DOF. And now her face stands out draws my attention away from her chest, which was the prominent feature(s) in the previous version. I don't have the cargo bay, but I'm guessing you can't do much about the distortion of textures on the wall in the close up view. Apart from that, it's wonderful; almost looks like a still from a movie.

kenernest63

12:57AM | Sat, 12 May 2007

Every things been said that needs to be said. Great POV.

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