The Stowaway (Final) by woodant
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Okay...so firstly, thank you to all who commented on the first one and are now coming back for more (mad fools!). If you haven't seen the WIP and would like to see the differences please follow this URL:
http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=1432006
I *think* that should get you there.
So what have I done?
- Lightened the general face area to make it the overall focus point of the image. (Thanks Lemur01 for the heads-up on that action!)
- Removed the strange hand shadow from the character's left shoulder
- Softened up the shadows from clothing and removed the incorrect light from inside the left shorts leg.
- Softened the neck, removing some of that "twistiness" that was apparent before.
- Fractionally darkened the left eye to compensate for the increased brightness from the general face lighting
- Touched up the hair to fix a few unwanted artifacts
I haven't been able to change the way the shirt fits, as this appears to be something happening with the shirt geometry when the character had the Genesis body morph injected. I've tried a few things to improve it but they were all poor. Also, the texture artifacts on the right breast are present, even in a "straight-out-the-box" render with this clothing pack. I guess it's a mapping thing...
Anyway, I guess if you're still reading you must be bored by now, so...I hope you enjoy. Although I probably won't change it now, I'd be interested to hear if you think my changes have improved the image or made it worse! ;) lol
Thanks for looking,
Ant.
Credits: As before
Stonemason: Cargo Bay
Genesis for V4
LM Domino Outfit for V4
Comments (31)
FrankT
definately an improvement. Mind you - the original was pretty good
averroes
excellent
Rutra
I think it's better now but I see you havent fixed a thing that I thought would be the easiest: the lack of bumpiness in the blouse. That's the most notorious for me, specially in the lower part the blouse seems almost like plastic. Well, at least for me. Anyway, this is a good image. And, you know, I think this could become a series... where the mistery of what she's looking at would be unveiled, gradually. Or even intensified... I think the character and the BG are good enough to support that.
flaviok
belissima obra, aplausos
Baka001
whoa, i live the scenery... great image 5+
Thelby
Beautiful lighting and your Character is Most Gorgeous!!! Super Job, this is Awesome!!!
dricci
Cool scene!!! ;)
Denys234
Excellent!
netlion66
Great scene and top image!!
Greywolf Starkiller
Personally, I like it. I haven't seen the first image, but I really can't see how you can improve this any further. :)
DanB-Creations
Very nice render. Very beauty face!
FUNJOKER
E-X-C-E-L-L-E-N-T ;)*****.
Seliah
Oh, I LIKE this. Love her expression, this is an absolutely wonderful and imaginative point of view on the camera angle, too. Nice work!
cmcc
terrific picture. i really love it.
PoserSecrets
Very cool scene and great expression! Great lighting and shadows! *****
Kartika
Excellent scene and pose!
altec101
Stunningly beautiful!! Excellent artwork...
TheAnimaGemini
I really like this one. Great work.Love the camera angle and your lights. Excellent work.
JOELGLAINE
Much improved. You did good! Great scene!
Tracesl
Excellent
Sivana
It really looks much better with the new lighting now. Very good work!!
drifterlee
Gorgeous! I love the POV!
KarenJ
Very nice. Amazing how a few changes can make such an improvement, eh? The blurred background works really well. Great lighting too.
Tiari
Much better, that "inner short light" well, i've missed lighting like that myself and usually need someone to point it out.
Anniebel
Nice improvement, well done.
pjz99
Damn proxy server tried to eat me comment! I don't have any complaints, especially nice bit of yellow backlight the viewer expects to see coming from the dome light in the background. If you had not tried a magnet to adjust the fit of the shirt, you might do that. The texture flaw you could probably correct in postwork with clone and/or liquefy (assuming you use Photoshop)
DapperMan
As noted, great POV and DOF. And now her face stands out draws my attention away from her chest, which was the prominent feature(s) in the previous version. I don't have the cargo bay, but I'm guessing you can't do much about the distortion of textures on the wall in the close up view. Apart from that, it's wonderful; almost looks like a still from a movie.
kenernest63
Every things been said that needs to be said. Great POV.
cole4965
Really great image!!
GOLDILOCKSUK
Oh I love how she looks from behind the wall this is a top class image and she is lovely I like it :) Cathy xoxoxo