Singing In The Choir by beachzz
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Singing In The Choir
Yes I sing in the choir
It’s a joyful noise
A way to center myself
To let myself be heard
Yes it’s a way
To pray to praise
But more than that
It gives me peace
My songs fill my soul
With joy and life
And I share this
With anyone who will hear
I sing with my alto voice
Deep and low and full
I sing with my friends
and we share the same feeling
I sing and I love the sound
Of voices and guitars
Coming together
To make this joyful noise
1/26/08
Comments (11)
Chipka
You've definitely got a color thing going on here...I love the subtle shifts in color in the image that accompanies your text. The text itself is wonderfully simple and to the point, without useless hyperbole. The image though, I think it's the color combination that really strikes me...it makes sense, but it's also unexpected on a level, I guess because of the shift in the blueish writing, I love the way it fades to an off white which should be lost in the lavenderish/pinkish background, but it doesn't vanish...great visual sense surface tension there. In short, I like this piece!
ledwolorz
Excellent .
Thelby
And I dig that ;^D
mickuk50
your a great writer marilyn you fit the words perfectly .when i get brain freeze again will you write my comments :o)..excellent work my friend mick
KarmaSong
Excellent work,
Mad-Mike
God Bless you darlin! and very nice words you shared with us! wonderful!!! :-) Have a great Sunday hugsssss Mike xo
photostar
You got me with this one, Marilyn, since my profession is as a music director and organist. Thanks for sharing it this Sunday morning.
JeffG7BRJ
Wonderful prose Marilyn, a new side to you, quite a nice new side at that. Excellent work! Bravo!!!!! The Friday group I go to with Alan(artaddict2) has quite a few talented people, one of them, Kevin writes poetry about things he has done and people that he knows. His mother was also talented in the same way, I will ask him if I can post a couple of them on here.
jocko500
wonderful. love to hear you sing
auntietk
How funny. I read this, and had to go back and look because I thought the title was "Make A Joyful Noise." I think I thought so from the beginning! Maybe I'm just losing my mind. In any event, your closing line just wrapped the whole thing up for me. Excellent work!
alhak
I sing in the shower! lovely verse