Rainin Outside And In My Heart by beachzz
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Rainin Outside And In My Heart
Yeah it’s rainin outside
Wet and cold
Nasty and damp
It’s just rainin
Sometimes I feel
Like it’s rainin
In my heart
In my soul
Sometimes I feel
Wet and cold
Nasty and damp
In my heart
There’s not much
I can do then
Except bundle up
And go out anyway
So that’s what I do
When it’s rainin outside
And it’s rainin
In my heart
I bundle up my body
And my heart and soul
And just get out
And meet the world head on
And I feel better
1/31/08
Comments (11)
auntietk
This has a nice cadence and feel to it. Wonderful work, my friend! Keep 'em coming!
Thelby
Rain Rain Go Away, Come Again Another Day. Rain Rain GO Away, Don't Come Back till the Month of May. That is a Very Piccie you posyed up there.!!!
JeffG7BRJ
I can relate to this, yeah, I sure can! Sometimes, I wake up in the morning and think, 'What do I need to get up for?' You know, the answer is always the same, 'Nothing!' Sometimes I wake up in the morning and think, 'What purpose do I have in life?' You know, the answer is always the same, 'None!' I used to wake up in the morning and think, 'What a glorious day it is!' You know, 'It usually was!' I used to wake up in the morning and think, 'Another day, another dollar!' You know, 'I went out and earned it!' I can't go out and earn anymore, And you know what, 'That really pisses me off!' I like your words a whole lot more than mine Marilyn. Keep em coming gal! Bravo!!!!!
Mad-Mike
Hey very cool Marilyn :-) and a very cool photo as well! It is raining outside now matter of fact :-)
sharky_
Nice..... Aloha
mickuk50
rainy days and sunday always get me down in the words of the carpenters :o)..i just can`nt imagine you feeling like this .your writing is going from strength to strength. excellent marilyn mick
Chipka
There was a time when it would rain and be utterly cold, and I'd just pop on the soundtrack to Blade Runner and listen to the utterly urban, melancholy music. Usually THAT got me to writing. This is a gorgeous work, the image is evocative of so many things and I love the fact that it matches what you wrote, but not exactly. It's as if you've captured a note of ambivalence...something that the rain would bring. I love the range of emotions evoked by this piece of work, and the last line, breaking the pattern of stanzas adds wonderful punctuation to what you've written. Great stuff, Marilyn. I love it.
alhak
i love raining days, they give me a sense of peace i think. wonderful words
jocko500
cool words and image too
photostar
Great words to live life by. Thanks for sharing, Marilyn.
goodoleboy
I don't know...the precipitation didn't seem to bother Gene Kelly in the movie, Singing In The Rain. I'm singin in the rain, just singin in the rain, what a wonderful feeling, I'm happy again.... Then again, we have the situation with Noah and the Ark. Again, Marilyn, an excellent image with prose to match!