Where Are You? by beachzz
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Where Are You
Where are you
Where have you gone
You were here
And we were together
Where are you
I know you
Are out there somewhere
You’re just not answering me
One of these days
You’re going to look around
You’re going to look for me
And I won’t be there
Because I will be gone
And you’ll wonder why
And how it happened
And you’ll be asking
Where are you
Where have you gone
You were here
And we were together
And now we’re not
2/3/08
Comments (16)
amlondono
Beautiful shot and poem , Ana
Mad-Mike
Interesting poem Marilyn. I wonder where he is? and nice wordings :-) also I love that photo! very good job ~ have a lovely night :::cheers:::
sharky_
I like the tones of this one. Excellent. Aloha
Thelby
Kinda Sad Really, but I know the feeling. There today and tomorrow,............................................... Well at least you got Mike and me 8^D
JeffG7BRJ
Have to agree with Thelby on this one Marilyn, kind of sad this but still very good prose. I'm about 17 miles North of Manchester UK, the town of Rochdale, the home of the Co-op, the Rochdale Pioneers, of Gracie Fields, and Sir Cyril Smith. The world record holders of, wait for it, drum roll, tossing(the worlds largest pancake, that is).lol. So thats where I am. Excellent work Marilyn, I love it. Bravo!!!!!
Chipka
I love this poem. It's another evocative gem that calls up a whole range of emotions, and the image that accompanies it is brilliant. I love the whole thing. It has the feel of poetry, a ballad, and a few other wonderfully poetic forms. This is superb work on every count!
auntietk
"Don't it always seem to go that you don't know what you've got 'til it's gone?" I love the evocative mood you've created with this poem. There's a bit of sadness for what's being lost, of course, but there's also a real sense of moving on. It's the tenses you've used, the way it flows. Good stuff, my friend!
photostar
Your words along with the pic are really deep, Marilyn. Perfect duo. This one is definitely one to contemplate on and think about. I think we as a species, often times take too much and each other for granted. Thanks for sharing this one.
mickuk50
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m here :o)..wow marilyn this is very deep and im assuming its connected to you in some way .this is excellent work my friend mickJaniss
Your writing is a big pleasure and also capture my friend!
alhak
your verses remind me of my Nanna, she would write all the time about anything and everything, they were always a joy to read just as yours are!
goodoleboy
One of these days, you're gonna miss me, baby... Anyway, auntietk's comments in re your prose reflect my own. Terrific mood effect in this sepia tone image, Marilyn, and I really like the silhouetting of the barren trees against the somber sky.
jocko500
wonderful words
vaggabondd
Very nice. Some people just take it for granted that you will always be there and they don't have to pay any attention to you. Some have to learn the hard way. Very good writing my friend :)
mamabobbijo
Evokes such feeling. So well done.
Shucoda
Wonderful words to a beautiful photo Marilyn.. Wonderful job all round ;)