A Drink In My Hand by beachzz
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A Drink In My Hand
Yeah, I have
A drink in my hand
It’s great big
Margarita
On the rocks
No salt
And it
Is good
I don’t
Drink a lot
To excess
Too much
But when I do
This is it
Tequila
SO good!!
Just makes me
Feel a little loose
A little silly
A little smooth
I don’t have
More than one
I just enjoy
This one big
Margarita----Salud!!!!!
2/12/08
Comments (20)
Chipka
Great work here! I love reading your stuff. I'm going without sleep here...a situation that will be rectified once the sun is higher up...but suffice it to say, I'm in a loopy mood and when I read the title of this piece, I immediately thought of the things I enjoy the most. "A drink in my hand...a book in my lap." Sounds a bit like a song, the kind you're hear on twangy interstate radio, when it's only you, your car, the road, and the guy (or girl) in the passenger seat, snoring through their promise to keep you awake. How and why THAT popped into my head, I'll never really know...but there it is. As for what you wrote, it's a brilliant piece that evokes quite a lot! I love it!
Madbat
Cheers! clink
Mad-Mike
Haha awesome!!! really loved this writing from you :-) ::: cheers buddie! ::: and yep, never hurts to get loose once in a while! I say "Enjoy life, while you have it!" very cool one ~ Happy Spirits indeed :)
Thelby
Does it come in a virgin form??? Cool Photo girl!!!
ARTWITHIN_II
Salud! Enjoy that Margarita. About once or twice a year I enjoy a beer or two. That keeps it really special, and standing on two feet. ;))) Wonderful, fun poem. Now, I think it is time for a beer.
mickuk50
a little bit of what you fancy does you good :o)..excellent writing again marilyn mick
JeffG7BRJ
Salud!!!!
photostar
If you ever get the chance to go to Key West, Florida, Marilyn, you need to stop by Jimmy Buffest's 'Margaritaville.' Best damn margaritas I ever had...and I like mine with the coarse salt around the rim of the glass. Hmmm, good!
auntietk
I should have looked at this last night! LOL! Now it's too early for me. Nice work! :) I'm loving your poetry.
alhak
CHEERS! great verse
vaggabondd
A toast to feeling a little silly and a little smooth. two of my favorite feelings. nice stuff my friend
Tanglimara
Great poem, now where's my drink LOL. Tony :-)
amlondono
A toast !!! great poem Ana
LudyMelltSekher
Good evening my dear friend, SALUD!!!A wonderful composition photo and poem full of harmony and beauty.Fantastic work. Superbly done!! Congratulations!! A million stars ***** Thanks you very much for you comments.Happy weekend. Hug and kiss in Your heart.Luminous blesing.Happy Valentine's Day to you.Ludy
jocko500
wonderful
goodoleboy
Sweet Adeline.....Happy New Year...hic! See what the boys in the back room will have, and I'll have the same....muy bueno! Interesting capture taken under interesting conditions.
mamabobbijo
I have never really gotten into alchohol, but I'm with photostar, have a Waborita. He owns a factory down the road, ( Buffet not photostar) they make this blue coloured tequilla. AMAZING!
marybelgium
à votre santé !
Issemissen
Silly and smooth.. We feel that way far to seldom, or at least I know I do. Must really shape up regarding my drinking habits. Should have a drink more often than once every half year, at least.. :)
D.C.Monteny
Wonderful poetry, i like your direct no nonsense style.