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LOOSE ALONG A WALL

Writers People posted on Apr 21, 2008
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LOOSE ALONG A WALL Memory, for me, is a high-walled garden - part haven, part trap. In memory of my mother who lived just two years less than I have up to now. She died of Cancer aged 64 years. It is by no means unique for mother and son to share a special bond, though in my mother's case it was probably more than usual because I was a constant living reminder of her first and only true love - my father, who was killed in WW2. Her second marriage, apart from the gift of my two sisters, was more a feat of endurance. She wrote [for me] ADVICE to MY SON I thank the Lord for giving me A purpose in my life: And now that you are leaving And bringing home a wife I wish thee joy. And hope you gain What I have lost A loving little boy. I travelled to your home along such devious ways And found a love so rare as is seldom found But remember, child, love not too well: Choose whether to hurt life, or it hurts you. ------------------------------------ My poem [for her]: LOOSE ALONG A WALL Here and now, hanging loose along a wall scented geraniums, green and tangled: distant heartaches, green and tangled Far behind her eyes her mind flutters in the wind of her hopes like tomorrow's washing. Watching the child she sloughs the years, and oh but oh the journey back. Seasonless, the rain is a prophet, not of Spring, nor of Autumn but of tears. Nearby heartaches, green and tangled: scented geraniums, green and tangled hanging loose along a wall, there and then.

Comments (21)


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STEVIEUKWONDER

5:29AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

How very moving Mike. It is devastating news that you tell me your life may be shortened. I am lost for words. Steve :o)

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RodolfoCiminelli

6:01AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Gret imagination and creativity my friend.....!!! Fantastic realization.....!!!!

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dhanco

6:08AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Oh, so very moving, both poems, her's and your's. You come by your talent naturally. A wonderful tribute to your Mother and Her to you, with her warm and loving words.

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Meisiekind

6:10AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

"her mind flutters in the wind of her hopes".... what a very moving poem dear Mike. What a blessing it must have been to have a mother like her! Hugs, Carin xx

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meico

6:20AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Sorry, Steve, if I've expressed myself badly ... honestly I'm as OK as ever I was! Mike

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BlueLotus7

7:04AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

I can certainly vouch for the bonding of mother/son! My son and I share many interests and when his 9 yr marriage fell apart I was there for him; when they decided to try again I was there for them; now she's left again and I am here for him...having a child is a lifelong responsibility and it seems your mom knew that also...as do you :) As for my son he says I'm his best friend and his "only" mom so he has to watch over me when my hubby's deployed. LOL AND he takes care of my computer problems! WOOT!

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leanndra

7:45AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Mike, Your words, and your mom's touched a chord in my heart that sings of sorrow, and of joy. Memory IS part haven, and part trap. Something we can't escape, and despite all the pain, I don't think we would want to. Your writing is so expressive. It takes great personal courage to reveal your inner self. I salute you! Lea

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helanker

8:53AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Lucky is the person who has sweet memories from childhood. Not all people can say they have that. I am happy to know, that you mother gave you sweet memories. So did my. :)

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auntietk

8:59AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

A beautiful set of poems, my friend. I love the second part: "Far behind her eyes her mind flutters in the wind of her hopes like tomorrow's washing." That's some fine writing!

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beachzz

9:22AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

You've touched all of us with these words and this beautiful image. Memories, oh yes, they can make you laugh or cry, but still, they are always there for the taking. My son and I have this bond, and you've reminded me of it so very sweetly~~thank you!!

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kansas

9:46AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Very touching words of memories. Beautifully written.

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avalonfaayre

10:33AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

How spiritual the bond between Mother and Son. It is rare that a son can sense it. It is often one sided. You play heart strings with words.

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algra

10:49AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Wonderful dedication.

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romanceworks

11:30AM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Your mother gifted you with something very precious - the ability to receive and to give love. You show that so beautifully in your memories as well as your poems. CC

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hipps13

3:41PM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Hi Mike Beautiful heart felt words I liked reading it for it brought many thoughts Beautiful work sweet smile to you warm hug, Linda

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AusPoet

6:43PM | Mon, 21 April 2008

A lovely and moving piece as always, Mike. Intense emotion, very neatly contained.

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amota99517

8:15PM | Mon, 21 April 2008

This is wonderful and such a lovely remembrance for the years to come. Splendid work and a very lovely dedication.

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busi2ness

10:05PM | Mon, 21 April 2008

Your words are certainly touching a nerve with me my friend, referring to the special bond between mother and son. I stand here by your well gaze down into the murky dark the depth and end I could not tell yet the sounds were those of the lark sweet echoes nurturing old memories of the mother I know so well.

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mickuk50

4:01PM | Wed, 23 April 2008

i lost my mum 2 years ago .the worst day of my life .wonderful words mick

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amirapsp

10:30AM | Mon, 28 April 2008

Wonderful image!!!

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flaviok

1:56PM | Tue, 17 June 2008

A poesia flui como vertente em suas veias, fascinante e maravilho trabalho, aplausos (5)


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