Salt by Gaiadriel
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FE & PS
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I feel like rain,
trapped in a box,
Or, at least,
the memory of it
Loss,
in arpeggio
One blinding shock of light,
soul-shattering clap
And then it comes,
the endless roll
of your absence's thunder
Quaking, I'm the contents
within, now without
Staring, blinded,
yet with vision clear
and unobscured
Having kissed
the human possibilities
When all is born
of love, and care
I know this vacant place,
too well
Why are the confines now so new,
some very foreign space,
suddenly as unnavigable
as my own skin
Tighter, constricting,
too aware of my fragility
My wings beat, frantic,
frantic, for escape
To leave reality far behind,
just long enough,
I plead,
just long enough,
for the freedom
of a single
filling breath
It doesn't come
It doesn't come
There is only silence now,
The sweet and angst of memory,
some faraway metronome of
my own heart,
and...
~salt~
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The taste reminds me of you
Comments (34)
bpclarke
Gorgeous art work and splendid poem. Very poignant and passionate. Superbly done. Bunny
blankfrancine
Wonderful poem and image, Nancy. Glad to see you around here more often.
claude19
EXtraordinary poem, I like it and I understand this artwork !!!
Shiroyama
awesome poem and lovely image.
annie5
Fantastic texture on this one! Stunning artwork :)
amota99517
Your pros are beautiful as is your art!!! They compliments each other so well. Beautiful work!!!!
daffodilbaggins
Very well done image, very strong mood piece!
afugatt
Very nice!
timtripp
gorgeous!
bcrathburn
great piece the poem is touching shadow+++++++++++++++++++++++++
ledwolorz
Wonderful poem and work.
carlx
Looks fantastic!!!
DeathTwister
Wow, is all I can say, very nice hun
Janiss
Really sublim Nancy... I adore!
mansco
Love your splendid poem and picture. Fantastic my dearest friend ;O)
farmerC
exellente creation.
ElizaB
I was very moved by your words and your fractal creation
Richardphotos
unique effect and lovely fractal art
NefariousDrO
So well done! I'm glad to see your beautiful fractals, and lovely poetry here again!
juca
Your gallery and words are beautiful!! Congratulations!!!
iceberg5
A lovely poem to accompagny this most excellent image - superb surface textures and reflective effects !
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three_grrr
Oh Nancy, I cried. A beautiful work, in it's entirety.
NekhbetSun
Ohhhh Nancy, not sure what prompted this outpouring, but it's soooo touching and emotional....wonderful accompanying image too Sorry my comment is so late but I never got an ebot for this You know you're in my thoughts mi hermana... B*B & Hugs Mina
e-brink
Beautiful poem. Your words are superb. Wonderful image - reflective... of course.
Lipa
Water on the rocks and lots of atmosphere.
qbase7pa
complex and beautiful
anahata.c
for the longing in your poem, you give an image of almost microscopic beauty, and organic & intimate too. As if, looking into this molecule in your heart, you see the immensity of life's patterns spread before you. It really does feel cellular, a macro of the soul; and there are energy-lines too (something I'm beginning to notice in your work), or lines of tension in an energy field. And the whole burgeons out into an infinite cellular field well beyond the frame, as if we're looking at one part of a highly organic whole. I hope your health is ok (I read your description a few images back) and that you're of good spirits. Know that your images are gifts. An intricate & intimate work, and multi-leveled.
lior
Superb fractal artwork! Have a nice and sweet week end Lior
alltheoriginalnames
Excellent work on this, very well done. Wonderful poem as well