Salt by Gaiadriel
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Description
FE & PS
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I feel like rain,
trapped in a box,
Or, at least,
the memory of it
Loss,
in arpeggio
One blinding shock of light,
soul-shattering clap
And then it comes,
the endless roll
of your absence's thunder
Quaking, I'm the contents
within, now without
Staring, blinded,
yet with vision clear
and unobscured
Having kissed
the human possibilities
When all is born
of love, and care
I know this vacant place,
too well
Why are the confines now so new,
some very foreign space,
suddenly as unnavigable
as my own skin
Tighter, constricting,
too aware of my fragility
My wings beat, frantic,
frantic, for escape
To leave reality far behind,
just long enough,
I plead,
just long enough,
for the freedom
of a single
filling breath
It doesn't come
It doesn't come
There is only silence now,
The sweet and angst of memory,
some faraway metronome of
my own heart,
and...
~salt~
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The taste reminds me of you
Comments (34)
kasalin
It`s a wonderful fractal creation, also i like your poem !!! vote:5**** :)
projectch3
Warrior poet and visionary... );-( Please show us more
KarmaSong
Superb composition and poetry . Both are a wonderful key to your dream world and inspiration. Excellent!
CarolSassy
Salt, huh? Well this picture is titillating. Hints of where you are and the tremors of you trying to escape. Cool one! (: