Salt by Gaiadriel

Fractal • Realism • posted on Aug 24, 2008

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FE & PS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I feel like rain, trapped in a box, Or, at least, the memory of it Loss, in arpeggio One blinding shock of light, soul-shattering clap And then it comes, the endless roll of your absence's thunder Quaking, I'm the contents within, now without Staring, blinded, yet with vision clear and unobscured Having kissed the human possibilities When all is born of love, and care I know this vacant place, too well Why are the confines now so new, some very foreign space, suddenly as unnavigable as my own skin Tighter, constricting, too aware of my fragility My wings beat, frantic, frantic, for escape To leave reality far behind, just long enough, I plead, just long enough, for the freedom of a single filling breath It doesn't come It doesn't come There is only silence now, The sweet and angst of memory, some faraway metronome of my own heart, and... ~salt~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The taste reminds me of you

Comments (34)

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bpclarke

6:42PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

Gorgeous art work and splendid poem. Very poignant and passionate. Superbly done. Bunny

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blankfrancine

6:45PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

Wonderful poem and image, Nancy. Glad to see you around here more often.

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claude19

6:46PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

EXtraordinary poem, I like it and I understand this artwork !!!

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Shiroyama

7:51PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

awesome poem and lovely image.

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annie5

8:09PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

Fantastic texture on this one! Stunning artwork :)

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amota99517

8:29PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

Your pros are beautiful as is your art!!! They compliments each other so well. Beautiful work!!!!

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daffodilbaggins

10:00PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

Very well done image, very strong mood piece!

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afugatt

10:45PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

Very nice!

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timtripp

10:46PM | Sun, 24 August 2008

gorgeous!

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bcrathburn

2:10AM | Mon, 25 August 2008

great piece the poem is touching shadow+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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ledwolorz

4:07AM | Mon, 25 August 2008

Wonderful poem and work.

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carlx

5:00AM | Mon, 25 August 2008

Looks fantastic!!!

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DeathTwister

8:00AM | Mon, 25 August 2008

Wow, is all I can say, very nice hun

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Janiss

9:51AM | Mon, 25 August 2008

Really sublim Nancy... I adore!

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mansco

1:36PM | Mon, 25 August 2008

Love your splendid poem and picture. Fantastic my dearest friend ;O)

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farmerC

1:55PM | Mon, 25 August 2008

exellente creation.

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ElizaB

4:22PM | Mon, 25 August 2008

I was very moved by your words and your fractal creation

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Richardphotos

5:47PM | Mon, 25 August 2008

unique effect and lovely fractal art

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NefariousDrO

8:21PM | Mon, 25 August 2008

So well done! I'm glad to see your beautiful fractals, and lovely poetry here again!

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juca

1:10PM | Tue, 26 August 2008

Your gallery and words are beautiful!! Congratulations!!!

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iceberg5

3:46PM | Tue, 26 August 2008

A lovely poem to accompagny this most excellent image - superb surface textures and reflective effects !

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FractalForum

4:29AM | Mon, 01 September 2008

Congratulations! This image has been chosen for the Fractal Window Weekly in the Fractal SubCommunity. You will find the announcement in the Fractal Forum.

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three_grrr

11:48AM | Mon, 01 September 2008

Oh Nancy, I cried. A beautiful work, in it's entirety.

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NekhbetSun

5:39AM | Thu, 04 September 2008

Ohhhh Nancy, not sure what prompted this outpouring, but it's soooo touching and emotional....wonderful accompanying image too Sorry my comment is so late but I never got an ebot for this You know you're in my thoughts mi hermana... B*B & Hugs Mina

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e-brink

4:33PM | Sat, 06 September 2008

Beautiful poem. Your words are superb. Wonderful image - reflective... of course.

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Lipa

8:43AM | Mon, 08 September 2008

Water on the rocks and lots of atmosphere.

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qbase7pa

2:10PM | Tue, 09 September 2008

complex and beautiful

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anahata.c

12:29AM | Sun, 14 September 2008

for the longing in your poem, you give an image of almost microscopic beauty, and organic & intimate too. As if, looking into this molecule in your heart, you see the immensity of life's patterns spread before you. It really does feel cellular, a macro of the soul; and there are energy-lines too (something I'm beginning to notice in your work), or lines of tension in an energy field. And the whole burgeons out into an infinite cellular field well beyond the frame, as if we're looking at one part of a highly organic whole. I hope your health is ok (I read your description a few images back) and that you're of good spirits. Know that your images are gifts. An intricate & intimate work, and multi-leveled.

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